Jaredman92
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Hi All,
First of all, thank you all for being such an awesome community. I've been lurking and reading novels from Scribblehub for one, going on two years now. I have been floored by the helpfulness and innovation of many authors here.
This site actually made me want to start creating stories myself :)
Now, let me tell you a bit about myself and my novel.
I am a new author, trying to learn how to create interesting and fun stories. The novel I'm currently writing is about an American MC who refuses to give up his values of kindness and helping others, within a cultivation world.
I'm really hoping for some constructive critique on my story, since I'm having trouble identifying the nagging feeling that I'm making a mistake in how I build the character and the reactions of people around him. If you have critiques on other parts of the story, those are more than welcome, as well.
Thank you and I hope you like my book!
Link to my novel below:
Fighting to be Kind in a Cultivation World
First of all, thank you all for being such an awesome community. I've been lurking and reading novels from Scribblehub for one, going on two years now. I have been floored by the helpfulness and innovation of many authors here.
This site actually made me want to start creating stories myself :)
Now, let me tell you a bit about myself and my novel.
I am a new author, trying to learn how to create interesting and fun stories. The novel I'm currently writing is about an American MC who refuses to give up his values of kindness and helping others, within a cultivation world.
I'm really hoping for some constructive critique on my story, since I'm having trouble identifying the nagging feeling that I'm making a mistake in how I build the character and the reactions of people around him. If you have critiques on other parts of the story, those are more than welcome, as well.
Thank you and I hope you like my book!
Link to my novel below:
Fighting to be Kind in a Cultivation World
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