New cover for my wacky story

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So I have a wacky story planned out about a decent guy who ends up in the porn cinematic universe, but all he wants to do is live a normal life. The old art I commissioned for it was great, but with how I'm changing the focus to be about how real world logic would apply to the scenarios the main character finds himself in and the story overall being more about how wacky things are rather than outright shaming, I needed a new cover.

So I tried making one myself using a mix of Wombo Dream and Waifu Labs. What do you think? Also, here's the synopsis of the story, and I'd love it if you could let me know if you think that the cover looks good and matches it well!

A rationalist progression litrpg with little to no actual NTR or smut!

A story for those who are tired of being surrounded by all of the harem, smut, and ntr stories and want some vindication for your frustrations! Also for anyone who does happen to be a fan of those genres looking for another satirical take without being shat on!

I thought I hit the jackpot when I found myself in the body of another man (no, not that way!), but the world I found myself in could've been... less bizarre. Sure 1980s New Jersey wasn't that bad, even if things didn’t quite match the history books, but why the hell does everything here run on porn logic?!

Couldn't make rent? Pay with sex. Bored at work and want to kill some time? Find a customer and head to the bathroom! Wanted to give your pizza delivery driver an extra big tip? You got the point. What made it worse was that those in power would even abuse their positions to have their ways with others, so it wasn’t exactly a “free love utopia” here. Not to mention the fact that adultery was rampant despite the fact everyone was doing it, but nobody wanted to even consider the idea of an open relationship! Something even weirder was going on.

Everyone in this world was down bad, and I was even given an overpowered leveling system to make the most of it! Too bad for whatever force or god that brought me here, I wasn't going to play along.

After everything that I'd been through back on my own Earth, I was ready to live a normal life, but that'd be hard when this society barely made any sense! Still, everyone had access to food and running water despite the fact that bills could be paid with sex, so somebody must've been keeping the place running. I'd just have to find them and hope they let me join their "secret cabal". But until then, I was going to have a hell of a time trying to make a living here.

Heavily influenced by the likes of the Erogamer, this story will explore the social and ethical ramifications of a society built around porn logic! But without the smut, and a bit more philosophy.
 

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I don't remember the old cover, but the new one is confusing and not that great.
 

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So I have a wacky story planned out about a decent guy who ends up in the porn cinematic universe, but all he wants to do is live a normal life. The old art I commissioned for it was great, but with how I'm changing the focus to be about how real world logic would apply to the scenarios the main character finds himself in and the story overall being more about how wacky things are rather than outright shaming, I needed a new cover.

So I tried making one myself using a mix of Wombo Dream and Waifu Labs. What do you think? Also, here's the synopsis of the story, and I'd love it if you could let me know if you think that the cover looks good and matches it well!

A rationalist progression litrpg with little to no actual NTR or smut!

A story for those who are tired of being surrounded by all of the harem, smut, and ntr stories and want some vindication for your frustrations! Also for anyone who does happen to be a fan of those genres looking for another satirical take without being shat on!

I thought I hit the jackpot when I found myself in the body of another man (no, not that way!), but the world I found myself in could've been... less bizarre. Sure 1980s New Jersey wasn't that bad, even if things didn’t quite match the history books, but why the hell does everything here run on porn logic?!

Couldn't make rent? Pay with sex. Bored at work and want to kill some time? Find a customer and head to the bathroom! Wanted to give your pizza delivery driver an extra big tip? You got the point. What made it worse was that those in power would even abuse their positions to have their ways with others, so it wasn’t exactly a “free love utopia” here. Not to mention the fact that adultery was rampant despite the fact everyone was doing it, but nobody wanted to even consider the idea of an open relationship! Something even weirder was going on.

Everyone in this world was down bad, and I was even given an overpowered leveling system to make the most of it! Too bad for whatever force or god that brought me here, I wasn't going to play along.

After everything that I'd been through back on my own Earth, I was ready to live a normal life, but that'd be hard when this society barely made any sense! Still, everyone had access to food and running water despite the fact that bills could be paid with sex, so somebody must've been keeping the place running. I'd just have to find them and hope they let me join their "secret cabal". But until then, I was going to have a hell of a time trying to make a living here.

Heavily influenced by the likes of the Erogamer, this story will explore the social and ethical ramifications of a society built around porn logic! But without the smut, and a bit more philosophy.
What even is a porn cinematic universe
So I have a wacky story planned out about a decent guy who ends up in the porn cinematic universe, but all he wants to do is live a normal life. The old art I commissioned for it was great, but with how I'm changing the focus to be about how real world logic would apply to the scenarios the main character finds himself in and the story overall being more about how wacky things are rather than outright shaming, I needed a new cover.

So I tried making one myself using a mix of Wombo Dream and Waifu Labs. What do you think? Also, here's the synopsis of the story, and I'd love it if you could let me know if you think that the cover looks good and matches it well!

A rationalist progression litrpg with little to no actual NTR or smut!

A story for those who are tired of being surrounded by all of the harem, smut, and ntr stories and want some vindication for your frustrations! Also for anyone who does happen to be a fan of those genres looking for another satirical take without being shat on!

I thought I hit the jackpot when I found myself in the body of another man (no, not that way!), but the world I found myself in could've been... less bizarre. Sure 1980s New Jersey wasn't that bad, even if things didn’t quite match the history books, but why the hell does everything here run on porn logic?!

Couldn't make rent? Pay with sex. Bored at work and want to kill some time? Find a customer and head to the bathroom! Wanted to give your pizza delivery driver an extra big tip? You got the point. What made it worse was that those in power would even abuse their positions to have their ways with others, so it wasn’t exactly a “free love utopia” here. Not to mention the fact that adultery was rampant despite the fact everyone was doing it, but nobody wanted to even consider the idea of an open relationship! Something even weirder was going on.

Everyone in this world was down bad, and I was even given an overpowered leveling system to make the most of it! Too bad for whatever force or god that brought me here, I wasn't going to play along.

After everything that I'd been through back on my own Earth, I was ready to live a normal life, but that'd be hard when this society barely made any sense! Still, everyone had access to food and running water despite the fact that bills could be paid with sex, so somebody must've been keeping the place running. I'd just have to find them and hope they let me join their "secret cabal". But until then, I was going to have a hell of a time trying to make a living here.

Heavily influenced by the likes of the Erogamer, this story will explore the social and ethical ramifications of a society built around porn logic! But without the smut, and a bit more philosophy.
Also post your old cover so we can compare
 

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What even is a porn cinematic universe

Also post your old cover so we can compare

It's supposed to take place in a world that runs on porn/hentai logic where everyone's super horny to the point of it making up a massive part of their culture. As for the old image, I changed it because it doesn't fit the theme of the story anymore (and I don't want to post it because it wasn't well received last time I shared it).
 

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It's supposed to take place in a world that runs on porn/hentai logic where everyone's super horny to the point of it making up a massive part of their culture. As for the old image, I changed it because it doesn't fit the theme of the story anymore (and I don't want to post it because it wasn't well received last time I shared it).
I'm not sure if such a world would advance as much as ours, 'cause you know... they're too preoccupied with other things to focus on science.
 

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So I have a wacky story planned out about a decent guy who ends up in the porn cinematic universe, but all he wants to do is live a normal life. The old art I commissioned for it was great, but with how I'm changing the focus to be about how real world logic would apply to the scenarios the main character finds himself in and the story overall being more about how wacky things are rather than outright shaming, I needed a new cover.

So I tried making one myself using a mix of Wombo Dream and Waifu Labs. What do you think? Also, here's the synopsis of the story, and I'd love it if you could let me know if you think that the cover looks good and matches it well!

A rationalist progression litrpg with little to no actual NTR or smut!

A story for those who are tired of being surrounded by all of the harem, smut, and ntr stories and want some vindication for your frustrations! Also for anyone who does happen to be a fan of those genres looking for another satirical take without being shat on!

I thought I hit the jackpot when I found myself in the body of another man (no, not that way!), but the world I found myself in could've been... less bizarre. Sure 1980s New Jersey wasn't that bad, even if things didn’t quite match the history books, but why the hell does everything here run on porn logic?!

Couldn't make rent? Pay with sex. Bored at work and want to kill some time? Find a customer and head to the bathroom! Wanted to give your pizza delivery driver an extra big tip? You got the point. What made it worse was that those in power would even abuse their positions to have their ways with others, so it wasn’t exactly a “free love utopia” here. Not to mention the fact that adultery was rampant despite the fact everyone was doing it, but nobody wanted to even consider the idea of an open relationship! Something even weirder was going on.

Everyone in this world was down bad, and I was even given an overpowered leveling system to make the most of it! Too bad for whatever force or god that brought me here, I wasn't going to play along.

After everything that I'd been through back on my own Earth, I was ready to live a normal life, but that'd be hard when this society barely made any sense! Still, everyone had access to food and running water despite the fact that bills could be paid with sex, so somebody must've been keeping the place running. I'd just have to find them and hope they let me join their "secret cabal". But until then, I was going to have a hell of a time trying to make a living here.

Heavily influenced by the likes of the Erogamer, this story will explore the social and ethical ramifications of a society built around porn logic! But without the smut, and a bit more philosophy.

wHaT a WaCkY sToRy.
 
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