shadowniy
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Hello, if you haven't already guessed, but I'm a noobie writer and would like some constructive criticism. The link to my story is in my signature. Its genre is mainly fantasy with sci-fi and RPG elements coming in to picture later.
Some friends read it, and they said it was good. But I want some other people's opinions. So far, I am happy with the first chapter, and most of chapter 2 is in the process of being done; I need to tweak the pacing for that.
Some friends read it, and they said it was good. But I want some other people's opinions. So far, I am happy with the first chapter, and most of chapter 2 is in the process of being done; I need to tweak the pacing for that.