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Wintertime

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Well, as you've said. It's the usual Harem cliche trope, so really nothing to review in terms of creativity.
The story starts off like any other harem story, I would have to read a lot more to get invested.

The story is also very slow. It could be a lot faster, but that gives you time to get into worldbuilding and character motivations, no?
Overall, a good start, pretty standard. Nothing out of the ordinary, and that's fine.

Who doesn't like a harem story?
 
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