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Okay. Noted. Thankyou so much for the honest opinion. I will work on it.
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Does Tanaka's and Xion's thoughts look the same? Which is why it was confusing?
I couldn't tell them apart, and that's a part of why it confused me-- but there were the other reasons I listed that it confused me as well.

It was very hard for me to follow the narrative in general.

Of course, this is just my read of it-- take all feedback with a grain of salt, including this.
 

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At first glance, resize the webnovel cover.
 

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So basically Otome Isekai?
Cause most of them do be that way.
And to be fair, they are doing well, so.
Hey. I don't make the audience.

The audience exists. Now you xan write the story you want, or you can write a story to make money. You usually can't do both.

But yeah, don't ask me why, but this demographic exists and they have a lot of disposable income. They were sold a lie about how to be happy, and now they have money, but no family and all the good men are sleeping with 20 yo sluts, just like she was a 20 yo slut who slept with 30 yo rich guys.

She cannot compete with her younger counterpart and nobody is shaming these sluts anymore, so any chance of her finding a man who takes care of her so she doesn't have to work anymore, AND is young and hot is next to nil.

Men don't care about how much money a woman makes.

So, they are alone, pissed off,and want to stop being "on" all the time. He'll, it's why I started writing flip the script. As a man, I have to always be "on". I have to be proactive. I have to make the choices. Yes, I got power in the relationship, but any good top will tell you that the thrill of being a bottom is not having to be in charge.

Honestly? Most B&D relationships I knew. The top got off on it, but the bottom was the one running things. The top has to take care of the bottom. Protect them, make all the choices...

Always be "on".

Yeah, you order them around, but You have to give the orders. It's exhausting. Even as a man, I wonder, how nice it would be to just have to worry about making one person happy, and nothing else.

Because I have... 14 bosses. 14 different people who can walk into my job and tell me what to do.

Imagine having only ONE boss. Now imagine sleeping with your boss. Imagine how easy that would be.

That's what these female readers reading reverse harem otome want. Just one boss, who loves them, instead of the dozen bosses they have working a 9 to 5 job.

And women can't even sleep with the boss to get ahead anymore. No male boss is going to risk his job, carreer, future, life for a little sex. Not in the age of Me Too.

So, they read 50 shades of soft core porn where they dream of the path not taken. Where they instead just found a rich man, got married, and...

Well, I was gonna say have kids, biut don't put that in. These wine box bitches will never have more children, so don't rub it in.
 
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