unknownking
your local shitposter
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As I stated in the title I wrote a new chapter and would like to know y'all's opinion on it. Background information isn't really necessary. To keep it short: MC, the oldest brother of five used a spell above his level, a teleportation spell. It failed and yeeted each of his siblings into different places of the world.
here is the link for the chapter in question.
I'm fine with any opinion/feedback ranging from I lost interest in the first paragraph to wall of text to nah fam that shit is mid or bland
here is the link for the chapter in question.
I'm fine with any opinion/feedback ranging from I lost interest in the first paragraph to wall of text to nah fam that shit is mid or bland