Second Time Asking a Review Here! If you have time, please help >///<

Rudia_Estelle

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Hello, I am just recently back on writing this story and got quite a bad review on the other website:sweating_profusely: but that definitely helped me for next chapters. That's why I would like to know how you guys think on my story. (Can be both positive or negative). It is the second time asking a review because I wanna get more opinions from many people so that I can improve more or get motivations! :blobrofl:
Here is the story.

Thank you all for your attention:blob_melt:
 
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