Slay The Cross, an isekai litRPG

[PBJ_Time]

I decided to rewrite my story into a second draft because I felt like I could still improve on my writing. That said, please let me know which works better as a published novel. Thank you!

Slay The Cross (Old)

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[melchi]

I think slaying gods is a bad premise for a story. Though the second one isn't rife with grammar errors.

 

[Deleted member 113259]

God slaying is religious sacrilege.

 

[PBJ_Time]

I think slaying gods is a bad premise for a story. Though the second one isn't rife with grammar errors.

I'll make it work somehow, lol. It'll be based on my beliefs with another social issues.

 

[sanitylimited]

thats even worse

 

[Lloyd]

This is disgusting. Find God.

 

[PBJ_Time]

This is disgusting. Find God.

 

[Deleted member 113259]

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I believe what my associate was trying to say is, "This is disgusting. Find God."