PBJ_Time
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I recently revised my synopsis last night, with the goal to make it as short as possible while also making it as concise as possible. Please let me know what you think.
Slay The Cross [Isekai LitRPG]
Hajime always believed that fire was the greatest tool of all. A young rebel’s heart would be nothing without it.
But how much fire do you need to set a much brighter future in another world? Either way, he’s utterly done trying to understand why the gods of Parallaxis “need” to watch over mortals like a camera drone. Not to mention the lightning strikes toward “heretics.” Gods belong in a church, not above the heads of humans and nonhumans alike.
Cue “When Doves Cry” playing on his earpods. Please don’t ask how he still has them.
Edit: I revised my synopsis to make it clear how the gods act in my story.
Slay The Cross [Isekai LitRPG]
Hajime always believed that fire was the greatest tool of all. A young rebel’s heart would be nothing without it.
But how much fire do you need to set a much brighter future in another world? Either way, he’s utterly done trying to understand why the gods of Parallaxis “need” to watch over mortals like a camera drone. Not to mention the lightning strikes toward “heretics.” Gods belong in a church, not above the heads of humans and nonhumans alike.
Cue “When Doves Cry” playing on his earpods. Please don’t ask how he still has them.
Edit: I revised my synopsis to make it clear how the gods act in my story.
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