TunTun's First Chapter Feedback

[TunTun]

This is similar to Minacia's First Chapter Feedback | Scribble Hub Forum [I'll read anything, from smut to non-fiction]

I will only read the first chapter, and I will be ruthless.

If I see something I like, I'll point it out.

Anyway, if you prefer not to be roasted in public, we can talk in this discord: https://discord.gg/3DyhCdFV5m

 

[DarkGodEM]

Sure.
Roast me!
You have 4 novels

 

[GDLiZy]

Harem and Empire

Tiberius thought he could live a comfortable life of debauchery. But then one night he fucked the Emperor's daughter and got drafted into the army. Watch as this kinky, sexual deviant slowly rises among the ranks of the imperial army, while slowly adding more Demi-humans to his slave harem. The...

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Reincarnated as Part of the Dungeon’s Harem

Don't let the Dungeon of Smut fool you; Beyond the fluffy bedsheets, Beyond the soft rugs, Beyond the never ending fornication, Beyond the young, naked flesh; Something truly macabre awaits. Monster Girl Codex: Arc 1: Dragon-Girls || Dark-Elves || Rat-Girls Lich-Girls || Cat-Girls ||...

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Be gentle please

 

[CadmarLegend]

Harem and Empire

Tiberius thought he could live a comfortable life of debauchery. But then one night he fucked the Emperor's daughter and got drafted into the army. Watch as this kinky, sexual deviant slowly rises among the ranks of the imperial army, while slowly adding more Demi-humans to his slave harem. The...

www.scribblehub.com

Reincarnated as Part of the Dungeon’s Harem

Don't let the Dungeon of Smut fool you; Beyond the fluffy bedsheets, Beyond the soft rugs, Beyond the never ending fornication, Beyond the young, naked flesh; Something truly macabre awaits. Monster Girl Codex: Arc 1: Dragon-Girls || Dark-Elves || Rat-Girls Lich-Girls || Cat-Girls ||...

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Be gentle please

Your novels include sex and you say

Be gentle please

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[Deleted member 45782]

Cool :D

 

[witch_sorrowful]

Roast away.

The Laid-back Undeath of Edgar Crow

You must have heard of Edgar Crow, the gentleman of Greycott, the philosopher. But so have his enemies. And he tends to make a lot of them, the poor man. They call him the Scourge of the Morning, the Terror of the Night. The rumours say he wants to destroy...

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