What do you think about this situation?

[CheertheSecond]

So a person who committed an irredeemable sin tried their best to make up for the past. They tried to do as much good deed as possible but they frequently got nightmare of the crime they made.



I want your judgement to be as impartial as possible. What do you think about their situation? Pitiful? Well-deserved?


Will reveal their sin after a while.

Spoiler: sin reveal

So in short, the person got drunk and fucked their underage kid. They felt bad about it and tried to make up for the past but are often haunted by the nightmare. The nightmare replaying the scene they did to their kid and it traumatised them because it reminded them of how good it felt. They were depressed because it showed them the devil inside which could return. Of course, they never wanted to commit that transgression. So when they were reminded of the time they were not themselves, they felt really bad about it. It's an attack on their conscience.

 

[Voidiris]

So a person who committed an tried their best to make up for the past. They tried to do as much good deed as possible but they frequently got nightmare of the crime they made.



I want your judgement to be as impartial as possible. What do you think about their situation? Pitiful? Well-deserved?


Will reveal their sin after a while.

Well I don't care about everyone involved and you should say the sin because 'irredeemable sin' has too much interpretation.
I would mind break him in a painful and entertaining way while the victims are watching.

 

[SailusGebel]

Depends on what the person did to atone.

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

So a person who committed an irredeemable sin tried their best to make up for the past. They tried to do as much good deed as possible but they frequently got nightmare of the crime they made.



I want your judgement to be as impartial as possible. What do you think about their situation? Pitiful? Well-deserved?


Will reveal their sin after a while.

How are we supposed to make a judgment if we don't know what they did or what they did to atone?

 

[Leti]

What do you think about their situation? Pitiful? Well-deserved?

The nightmare is well deserved. Sleep is for the weak.

 

[MatchaChocolate69]

If you're referring to the other thread, that type of crime is irredeemable.
It might be interesting to see the character suffer for what they have done but ultimately not receive forgiveness.
The only one who can absolve them is the victim. So, I would work on this point if it's your intention to have the character redeemed.
But this is just my opinion. You should write as you wish.

 

[Corty]

So a person who committed an irredeemable sin tried their best to make up for the past. They tried to do as much good deed as possible but they frequently got nightmare of the crime they made.



I want your judgement to be as impartial as possible. What do you think about their situation? Pitiful? Well-deserved?


Will reveal their sin after a while.

Get fucked.

Can't handle the consequences of something? Just don't do it.

 

[Voidiris]

Get fucked.

Can't handle the consequences of something? Just don't do it.

Wouldn't it be for some wonderful if life would be that easy.

 

[Corty]

Wouldn't it be for some wonderful if life would be that easy.

It is that easy.

irredeemable sin

In my interpretation that is pretty clear cut.

And no, killing someone is not irredeemable.

To do something hideous that would be irredeemable, that is along some pretty fucked up shit some cartel and serial killers pull off.

So I will reiterate:

Get fucked.

 

[georgelee5786]

A crime committed is a crime committed. Punishment is warranted. He deserves what he gets.

 

[Woolen_Bat_Monkey]

Trying to change is good but you can't just ignore the past. His nightmares are ultimately self-made and whether he has them for the rest of his life or not ultimately depends on him. I believe they are well deserved for the things he did.

 

[Generic.Archdemon]

an irredeemable sin

tried to do as much good deed as possible

frequently got nightmare of the crime

What do you think about their situation?

Fictional.

 

[TsumiHokiro]

Surreal.

 

[prognastat]

I mean the situation isn't described so I can't say what I would think of the situation. However by definition if it were truly an irredeemable sin then yea it's deserved by definition since irredeemable means redemption isn't an option.

 

[CheertheSecond]

Added sin.

 

[Voidiris]

Spoiler: sin reveal

I cried after reading this, not because it's sad or even horrific, it's because of confusion.
Depending on the drunkeness he might not even go in RL in to jail!
Where the fuck is that an irredeemable crime?

 

[CheertheSecond]

I cried after reading this, not because it's sad or even horrific, it's because of confusion.
Depending on the drunkeness he might not even go in RL in to jail!
Where the fuck is that an irredeemable crime?

That's new!

 

[Voidiris]

That's new!

Yes and you might want to change the sin to something actually irredeemable but people that do such rings can take pride in what they do.

 

[Generic.Archdemon]

Added sin.

Called it!

 

[Voidiris]

It's going to be interesting how Corty reacts to the sin especially because of our argument that we had in the thread.