overclockedw
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Hello everyone. I'm writing my first ever ScribbleHub story, and I'm about to cross the 30k threshold, after starting about two weeks ago.
While I've written tons of fanfiction before on other sites, this is my first story on a site like Scribblehub, and my first original story I've ever published online (original as in, not tied to any sort of pre-existing fanwork).
I don't get a lot of detailed comments other than one dedicated commenter, so I wanted to know what some people who'd be willing to look through it and give me feedback would think.
It doesn't necessarily have to be detailed, but tell me what you're willing to tell me about your thoughts on the story, characters, grammar, etc...even if you just choose to focus on one aspect, that's fine. Thank you in advance!
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While I've written tons of fanfiction before on other sites, this is my first story on a site like Scribblehub, and my first original story I've ever published online (original as in, not tied to any sort of pre-existing fanwork).
I don't get a lot of detailed comments other than one dedicated commenter, so I wanted to know what some people who'd be willing to look through it and give me feedback would think.
It doesn't necessarily have to be detailed, but tell me what you're willing to tell me about your thoughts on the story, characters, grammar, etc...even if you just choose to focus on one aspect, that's fine. Thank you in advance!
The Ultimate Extra – No Treasure Needed
Our protagonist is just a simple young man, one who enjoys playing games more than anything else. Until one day, he answers a question. A simple act that changes his life forever, as he's thrown into the game he's played more than any other. However he enters not as the...
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