ArcanePunkster
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Hello everyone!
For the last few months I've been writing an isekai web novel and it's nearing the end of the first volume. So long story short I'm looking for some feedback.
You don't have to read it all, and how you post your feedback is up to you. You can do it through comments, review or posts on this thread. Below I'll copy and paste the synopsis to my web novel and a link along with it.
Synopsis
Yuuma Akiyama is a popular high schoolboy loved by the girls and hated by the average boy and is secretly an otaku at heart. After an unfortunate accident, he dies saving someone he cares about only to be reincarnated into a new world as a demon girl known as Nariko Helel ben Shachar.
In a world with no magic and where the only means of fighting the Forsaken are with Cipher-Frames, huge mecha powered by mana that flows through the universe. Nariko will soon come to the realization of the truth behind her reincarnation and her true purpose in this new world.
Wish of the Cipher
For the last few months I've been writing an isekai web novel and it's nearing the end of the first volume. So long story short I'm looking for some feedback.
You don't have to read it all, and how you post your feedback is up to you. You can do it through comments, review or posts on this thread. Below I'll copy and paste the synopsis to my web novel and a link along with it.
Synopsis
Yuuma Akiyama is a popular high schoolboy loved by the girls and hated by the average boy and is secretly an otaku at heart. After an unfortunate accident, he dies saving someone he cares about only to be reincarnated into a new world as a demon girl known as Nariko Helel ben Shachar.
In a world with no magic and where the only means of fighting the Forsaken are with Cipher-Frames, huge mecha powered by mana that flows through the universe. Nariko will soon come to the realization of the truth behind her reincarnation and her true purpose in this new world.
Wish of the Cipher