JustKidding
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yes someone please review first two chapter of story and feedback. thank
So, Kirby, why are you here?Poyo
yes poyo yes yes yesPoyo
First of all, just from how you type your request, I can see that you don't have a good understanding of grammar.
I suggest you to learn some english text books bout English in your country language.
Ok... I take it back. Now I feel suspicious.
So, how's your writing ugly in this thread while in the story, you wrote good s#it?
Seriously, do tell.dont be
thank. you are goodperson
Please tell me you're not a troll.
I will be convinced that you're still bad at writing if you say so.
Seriously, do tell.
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Poyo?So, Kirby, why are you here?
Poyo?
Which one, dummy? This or someone else's?story brought a tear to my eyes. what a masterpiece
Which one, dummy? This or someone else's?
haha where you find so many meme
I'm gonna keep asking for you to elaborate with me and gives out the weird writing pattern topic's excuses.
Magicians don't reveal their tricks...haha where you find so many meme
what??I'm gonna keep asking for you to elaborate with me and gives out the weird writing pattern topic's excuses.
Basically...what??
But in your story, you wrote like an average english learner. So, why is that?haha where you find so many meme
the demonsBasically...
You typed like these here in the thread.
But in your story, you wrote like an average english learner. So, why is that?
the demons
im just messing with you man