Eroningen
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Started writing this a few weeks ago:
What I'm looking for in terms of feedback:
More importantly, I would love for some suggestions on where to push this story into the future as I'm a bit dry on interesting ideas for the main plotline (though I have side stories and side characters popping up constantly in my head...). The main big plot points I still haven't written are the first date and a later more "fancy" date. I have some vague ideas of things the main romance pair would be butting heads over (adding in some much needed conflict), but nothing super concrete yet... What do you see as interesting in a romance slice of life?
Day after
Shera woke up with someone else in her bed, and soon realizes last night was a lot wilder than she'd bargained for. This is the story of two women exploring their newfound love for each other, both in and out of bed. ---------------- Some additional tags/disclaimers/warnings: While this...
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What I'm looking for in terms of feedback:
- Could the synopsis be improved in terms of how well it describes the story? (I suck at writing synopses...)
- Anything in terms of the story itself (grammar, style, content)
- Any tips for visibility on the site?
More importantly, I would love for some suggestions on where to push this story into the future as I'm a bit dry on interesting ideas for the main plotline (though I have side stories and side characters popping up constantly in my head...). The main big plot points I still haven't written are the first date and a later more "fancy" date. I have some vague ideas of things the main romance pair would be butting heads over (adding in some much needed conflict), but nothing super concrete yet... What do you see as interesting in a romance slice of life?
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