Villam
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Hi, everyone.
I'm a new member here and need feedback on my story.
The story title is Northmen Saga, and here's the little blurb:
"I can judge friend or foe. I know which one is a big wolf, which one is a small dog, and which one is a small dog who only pretends to be a big wolf. You, big wolf."
William, a young blacksmith, had promised his mother not to go to the Northern Land and find out about his father's killer. But when he killed several bandits by the river, he had no choice but to flee north and finally revealed the secrets of his parents and origins.
I plan to update every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday.
All critiques and suggestions are welcome.
Thank you and best regards.
Villam
I'm a new member here and need feedback on my story.
The story title is Northmen Saga, and here's the little blurb:
"I can judge friend or foe. I know which one is a big wolf, which one is a small dog, and which one is a small dog who only pretends to be a big wolf. You, big wolf."
William, a young blacksmith, had promised his mother not to go to the Northern Land and find out about his father's killer. But when he killed several bandits by the river, he had no choice but to flee north and finally revealed the secrets of his parents and origins.
I plan to update every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday.
All critiques and suggestions are welcome.
Thank you and best regards.
Villam