NotaNuffian
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I have this problem when I write in normal setting, I have this problem as well when I try to incorporate an orgy/ cattle farm and I have this problem when I try to write about my MC going Lu Bu in Dynasty Warrior as he bashes skulls of mooks into their chest cavity like Doom.
I can't transition to the next character properly for some odd reason. The basis of how I wrote is as such:
1. Character A's experience, maybe inner monologue.
2. Cut to a general scene where something happened or something happening to Character B.
3. Character B's experience and maybe inner monologue.
And oftentimes I might not even include in point 2 because I thought to myself that the scene is still ongoing, do I have to rewrite what happened.
And when I do write it down, the thing feels like a femur jutted out from the skin as I write it.
I know that many advices are on "find your favorite writer and emulate them" and I did tried, the second is to "git gud and grind", so unless you have a third sentence of advice to make my sentence structure not awkward, I thank you for your words. If not, I thank you for reading.
I can't transition to the next character properly for some odd reason. The basis of how I wrote is as such:
1. Character A's experience, maybe inner monologue.
2. Cut to a general scene where something happened or something happening to Character B.
3. Character B's experience and maybe inner monologue.
And oftentimes I might not even include in point 2 because I thought to myself that the scene is still ongoing, do I have to rewrite what happened.
And when I do write it down, the thing feels like a femur jutted out from the skin as I write it.
I know that many advices are on "find your favorite writer and emulate them" and I did tried, the second is to "git gud and grind", so unless you have a third sentence of advice to make my sentence structure not awkward, I thank you for your words. If not, I thank you for reading.