Alkareel
Cuisses de Grenouille
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Working on writing something new, hope to reach out and get a few more impressions.
Regarding a Returning King's Magic - Link to Google Docs
Genre: Fantasy
Setting: Modern Medieval
Word Count: 4,300
Summary: The One-Armed King had spent over ten years fighting within the Spirit Domain. He encounters a calamity and defeats it at the cost the lives of everyone he knew. He himself was also approaching death. In his final moments, he wonders how everything would have turned out had he never been crippled. What ensues, you can probably tell by the title.
Content Warnings: beams of light and a “gurgle out blood”
There are two more chapters available that I haven't put on there. Haven't posted this on any site yet, I'll stockpile some chapters first.
Any critique is appreciated!
/ Flow / Character / Plot / Pacing / Style /
Regarding a Returning King's Magic - Link to Google Docs
Genre: Fantasy
Setting: Modern Medieval
Word Count: 4,300
Summary: The One-Armed King had spent over ten years fighting within the Spirit Domain. He encounters a calamity and defeats it at the cost the lives of everyone he knew. He himself was also approaching death. In his final moments, he wonders how everything would have turned out had he never been crippled. What ensues, you can probably tell by the title.
Content Warnings: beams of light and a “gurgle out blood”
There are two more chapters available that I haven't put on there. Haven't posted this on any site yet, I'll stockpile some chapters first.
Any critique is appreciated!
/ Flow / Character / Plot / Pacing / Style /