Well if it isn't the Vampire Queen herself. It's nice to get acquainted with fellow royalty for once. Especially one as great as yourself. As mentioned in a previous review, girl's love isn't my thing, but I was still happy to read. You vampires are very different from the stories most people tell. For reference I stopped at chapter 11, simply because the story is not my preferred genre. SoL + Gl + Isekai combined is a bit too much for my liking and I knew I wouldn't find what I want if I kept on reading in the long run.
In the short run though, your story was fun to read, and rather cute at times. It's refreshing after writing and reading things that sometimes take on a more serious demeanor. I must say that you're able to describe relationships between En and her retainers so well. It warms my heart, which is quite a hard task. I very much appreciate how you included the fact that En's brain age limits her cognitive function despite her reincarnating with her memories. It makes the story far less trope-y, and allows for some character development as she matures in a new body. My only 2 peeves:
- The start feels a bit forced. While there was no appearance of truck-kun(thankfully), her position prior to death is a very common trope and it feels worse when it's barely covered in half the first chapter. If you prefer not to write about such things in detail that's ok, I just feel like it could use a little more elaboration.
- This is really minor, but in the first chapter she states that she would cherish her next life. I guess it then becomes more of a question whether reincarnation is a held belief by her world's population(assuming earth), or if she somehow foresees the plot. Throughout the reincarnation progress she just seems to know that she's gonna have another life, which feels weird.
Anyway, as mentioned before, this story is not my kind of thing so I won't keep reading, but I will add it to my library. I am sure my eldest children will find an interest in the Vampire Queen's writings.
Style Score: 8
Story Score: 7
Grammar Score: 8
Character Score: 10
Overall Score: 8.3 + 0.1(Fluff)
P.S. It's a shame there isn't a heartwarming tag. More Fluff
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