So_Indecisive
Primordial sin of Sloth
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I've been reading this amazing book so far 'The Martial Unity' on Webnovel and it's been a great experience so far.
However the foreshadowing about a particular plot point was so godamn heavy that even I that finds myself very slow on the uptake could smell it coming from miles- solar systems away.
So the question is when does it become acceptable.
(a). So little that only the clairvoyant's among readers can pick up on.
(b). Too much even the dead can sense it coming.
(c). It's alluded too a couple of times but it's Hella vague so it's all good.
(d). F**k foreshadowing I'll just spring it up on them.
However the foreshadowing about a particular plot point was so godamn heavy that even I that finds myself very slow on the uptake could smell it coming from miles- solar systems away.
So the question is when does it become acceptable.
(a). So little that only the clairvoyant's among readers can pick up on.
(b). Too much even the dead can sense it coming.
(c). It's alluded too a couple of times but it's Hella vague so it's all good.
(d). F**k foreshadowing I'll just spring it up on them.