Ain't nothin' but a heartacheTell me why.
Can I consult you again?.Rewrite it until you think it is enough.
The most important part is you had fun writing the scene, and if you aren't take a few steps back to think.
That's was why it suck,I write a cultivation novel,all I know was martial art fight.When did the last time you see real life fist-fight ?
Visit a local dojo or some local martial art training group, and focus on the spars for better inspiration.
Shonen battle is pretty much similar to short spar in the first episodes.
They would only become prolonged by dozen of episodes after multiple season when they tried to milk their Viewer’s attention, but the first dozen episodes were always the best short fights.
Think of Cultivation as Elementary school degree, Middle School degree, High school degree and Univrsity degree.That's was why it suck,I write a cultivation novel,all I know was martial art fight.
The thing is i already familiar with martial art move than a bunch of gibberish on cultivation move.Think of Cultivation as Elementary school degree, Middle School degree, High school degree and Univrsity degree.
There's Hundreds of Thousand of school, offering unlimited future and potential for your advancement in society.
You can think of school as sects.
There's six stage of Elementary school degree, from year 1 to year 6.
There's three stage of Middle Scholl, from year 7 to year 9.
And finally, the High School, year 10 to year 12.
After that, is the realm of Big shot universities, ehich offer bachelor degrees.
Tell me why.
Uhh, watch "Avatar: The Legend of Aang" and copy their moves ?The thing is i already familiar with martial art move than a bunch of gibberish on cultivation move.
AIN'T NOTHIN' BUT A MISTAKE~Tell me why.
Your kung-fu is weak.Tell me why.
NOW NUMBER FIVE~AIN'T NOTHIN' BUT A MISTAKE~![]()
Thank you, this is the most useful advice j can find.I also struggle with action sequences.
The advice I can give you is to follow this simple concept: Action and then Reaction.
Here's a guide that explains it in detail.
Writing - [Tutorial] Writing ACTION 1: The Trick to Writing Action Scenes that Work
The Trick to Writing Action Scenes that Work: Action THEN Reaction! The #1 Most Common cause of Confusion in Action sequences...? Putting the Reaction BEFORE the Action. WARNING! This tutorial is NOT meant for those do Creative Writing. This essay was originally written for writers seeking...forum.scribblehub.com
Because of this guy,Iam able to write battle scene more beautifully.I also struggle with action sequences.
The advice I can give you is to follow this simple concept: Action and then Reaction.
Here's a guide that explains it in detail.
Writing - [Tutorial] Writing ACTION 1: The Trick to Writing Action Scenes that Work
The Trick to Writing Action Scenes that Work: Action THEN Reaction! The #1 Most Common cause of Confusion in Action sequences...? Putting the Reaction BEFORE the Action. WARNING! This tutorial is NOT meant for those do Creative Writing. This essay was originally written for writers seeking...forum.scribblehub.com
I never wanna hear you saaay~NOW NUMBER FIVE~