Freesia.Cutepearl
Nonsensically Weird while Weirdly Nonsensical
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Hi.
So, to try and be brief.
I wrote the buildup to a party scene from Lilith's perspective and then cut to the perspective of a new character at said "party", named Lilac.
Lilac's perspective was written as if it was a journal entry about the events, that she was writing 3 days in the future. It only talked about the events of Lilith's present though, no real time skip.
I got feedback that it was really jarring and it would have been better to cover Lilith's version of events first, then switch to Lilac's after.
I am not familiar with how re-ordering chapters works and I have seen talk of an anti-cheat system and what not, so I want to figure out the least disruptive way to handle fixing this.
I would like to write out the two chapters it'll take from Lilith's perspective, then the 2nd chapter of Lilac's, and ideally, move the current chapter 13, which is Lilac's first chapter, to be after the two about Lilith.
So what is now:
(12) Buildup from Lilith
(13) Party Scene from Lilac
Would ultimately become:
(12) Buildup from Lilith
(13) Party Scene from Lilith
(14) After Party Scene from Lilith
(15) Party Scene from Lilac
(16) After Party Scene from Lilac
What would be the least disruptive way to accomplish this, regarding anti cheat and how the posting system works?
I mainly just don't want my update to be hidden, even if I only get one when I finish all this shuffling.
Thank you.
So, to try and be brief.
I wrote the buildup to a party scene from Lilith's perspective and then cut to the perspective of a new character at said "party", named Lilac.
Lilac's perspective was written as if it was a journal entry about the events, that she was writing 3 days in the future. It only talked about the events of Lilith's present though, no real time skip.
I got feedback that it was really jarring and it would have been better to cover Lilith's version of events first, then switch to Lilac's after.
I am not familiar with how re-ordering chapters works and I have seen talk of an anti-cheat system and what not, so I want to figure out the least disruptive way to handle fixing this.
I would like to write out the two chapters it'll take from Lilith's perspective, then the 2nd chapter of Lilac's, and ideally, move the current chapter 13, which is Lilac's first chapter, to be after the two about Lilith.
So what is now:
(12) Buildup from Lilith
(13) Party Scene from Lilac
Would ultimately become:
(12) Buildup from Lilith
(13) Party Scene from Lilith
(14) After Party Scene from Lilith
(15) Party Scene from Lilac
(16) After Party Scene from Lilac
What would be the least disruptive way to accomplish this, regarding anti cheat and how the posting system works?
I mainly just don't want my update to be hidden, even if I only get one when I finish all this shuffling.
Thank you.