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    The Most Painful 'Death'...

    Death by torture, I suppose. Washboarding, sensory deprivation, starvation, barbs and whips, chains, psychological maiming, isolation, potential dismemberment, diseased blood loss, helplessness, a complete and utter lack of agency. . . Drawn out over a very, very long time. Since I'm female...
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    MC's Personality Degrades

    Hmm... Charlotte, probably.
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    Music suggestion.

    Like I said, what you hear in the music isn't necessarily what I hear. I understand it's an orchestral-remix-trap-song, but it also sounds plenty epic and intense in tone? If you don't see it that way, then let's just agree to disagree and leave it at that. It's a shame nothing anyone is...
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    Music suggestion.

    Lmao, genres mix and match. There's only so many categories you can have~ Post rock just has more general intensity, which seemed to be the main component of your sample. If your britches are really in a bunch, look at other video game music. They're all fairly dramatic and epic in tone...
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    Music suggestion.

    Sounds vaguely like post rock, maybe a bit of alt rock, except with a full orchestra. Can't say I have any specific playlists saved that sound exactly like this, but a quick search found this: Best of luck searching. I think it's best if you just wander around some genres (alt rock, post...
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    Example for what a recruitment inquiry shouldn’t look like

    'TYPORAMA' Well, if that isn't the cherry on type-- a watermark. If nothing else, at least 'Brian' serves his stupidity proportionately in entertainment value.
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    Real names.

    Not to the level of outright dislike, but between my name and me, there exists a bit of a gap. If you called out my name in a room, I would probably not notice. Rather than an issue with how my parents named me, however, I'd say it's just an interesting quirk of mine to not be attached to it...
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    Hello I am a newbie author I just want to know if you can help me fixing my novel

    Mhm. If I may add my take to the mix, none of this advice seems like something the OP could implement right now. Rather than fixing everything or continuing full throttle, I think they just simply don't know what they're doing. It's true that there are, objectively, no rules in writing, but you...
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    What's your opinion on this kind of time loop in a story?

    Certainly an interesting idea. Can't say I'd recommend executing it, seeing as I doubt very few of us on this site could pull it off. You might be able to, but it would require a few (well done) things, just to name a few from the top of my head: An apocalyptic end that is absolutely...
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    How do you usually start your story? Why?

    Some general advice I've heard on this -> Start with a bang. Whether said bang is loud, soft, squeaky or a leaky propane bazooka hastily assembled on a rooftop depends on your story and your story's tone. You'll only attract a specific niche/genre with the synopsis that you have in the first...
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    Apps that have sync mode

    I use Zoho Docs. It has an auto-sync feature, you can work offline, and it has an advanced writing feedback system integrated into the platform.
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    Writing [Tutorial] Tricks to Tight 'Sneaky' DESCRIPTION

    I have around eight of them, three who consistently read anything I write; five who follow along with a specific project. They catch me, specifically this one friend of mine, whenever there's a lack of visual information. But the rather hilarious thing is that my writing style completely...
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    Writing [Tutorial] Tricks to Tight 'Sneaky' DESCRIPTION

    Sigh Thanks for the reply; looks like there aren't any easy loopholes after all. I have my own system that I can reasonably bs my way through description competently, but it is always a struggle.
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    Writing [Tutorial] Tricks to Tight 'Sneaky' DESCRIPTION

    Hm, hm, many tricks indeed. My dear OP, I have a trick question for you (for a friend, cough) as well; whaaatt if the author has aphantasia? All of those tips and tricks require visualization~~
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    What is the best writing advice you’ve ever come across and take it to heart?

    That's too long of a block of text to reply to for my mere mortal fingers. @BlackKnightX I like simple prose as much as I like beautiful prose; they're both awesome in different ways. The main point was to keep it sweet~ Not necessarily short, but sweet. Follow our dear Buddha and keep to the...
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