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Thank you~ In fact, I made a mistake writing that first sentence. However, do you still think the old synopsis is more interesting overall? Even without mentioning the upcoming war? Again, I appreciate your help.

Can I have some feedback and advice on my new synopsis? Thanks!

Thank you for the clarification. I believe I'll focus on the old one and try to improve it. I appreciate your help~

That sounds like an award-winning story for Scribblehub :sneaky: I might just age her up, use a thottie anime girl as cover, and add the SMUT tag. Win-Win Yeah, you got a point. I guess I was just following the advice of other people who told me to do exactly the opposite xD But I believe...

Thank you~ I was going for that kind of tense, but actually, yours sound better in my head now. Do you think my old synopsis would work better? It's a lot more concise but Idk, it feels like it lacks something to me x.x You bring up some good points, but describing all that would make it even...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/190856/the-girl-with-the-crimson-eyes/

Hello people! I'm soon to become a self-published author, and I've been working on my synopsis in order to come up with something decent. I've done a few rewrites in the past weeks, and I'd like to ask for some tips and advice on what I have so far. Any kind of help will be very welcome. Thank...