CrimsonBlob
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Hello people! I'm soon to become a self-published author, and I've been working on my synopsis in order to come up with something decent. I've done a few rewrites in the past weeks, and I'd like to ask for some tips and advice on what I have so far.
Any kind of help will be very welcome. Thank you~
EDIT (9/15): Based on the advice I've gathered so far, I wrote a new synopsis (Thanks to the people who pointed out the flaws in it).
This is my old one:
Any kind of help will be very welcome. Thank you~
EDIT (9/15): Based on the advice I've gathered so far, I wrote a new synopsis (Thanks to the people who pointed out the flaws in it).
Remnya is a girl with horns and a destructive power sleeping within her. Growing up in an orphanage, she has learned to survive and protect the few friends who don't see her as a freak. However, when a mysterious lady adopts her, Remnya discovers how valuable her kind truly is.
But now she's surrounded by people she can't trust and monsters who will do anything to get a hold of her powers. A war for her is imminent, threatening to take the lives of those she loves.
Remnya won't surrender. She will protect them at all costs, even if that means abandoning her innocence and awakening the crimson monster living inside her.
What's right and what's wrong when your family is on the line?
But now she's surrounded by people she can't trust and monsters who will do anything to get a hold of her powers. A war for her is imminent, threatening to take the lives of those she loves.
Remnya won't surrender. She will protect them at all costs, even if that means abandoning her innocence and awakening the crimson monster living inside her.
What's right and what's wrong when your family is on the line?
This is my old one:
Remnya is an orphan girl with horns and a destructive power sleeping within her. Oblivious of it, she spends her days protecting her friends at the orphanage. However, when a mysterious lady adopts her, Remnya discovers how valuable her kind truly is.
But now she's surrounded by people she can't trust, and monsters who will do anything to get a hold of her powers. Her friends are at risk, along with thousands of innocent lives.
Remnya won't surrender. She will protect them at all costs, even if that means abandoning her own innocence and awakening the crimson monster living inside her.
But now she's surrounded by people she can't trust, and monsters who will do anything to get a hold of her powers. Her friends are at risk, along with thousands of innocent lives.
Remnya won't surrender. She will protect them at all costs, even if that means abandoning her own innocence and awakening the crimson monster living inside her.
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