Recent content by Diogenes111

I see, I mostly end my chapters in a satisfying way. so I always end up with no room for the next chap making it look like a week or day has passed in the story. I'll keep this in mind thank you.

So I was writing my chapters and I noticed that every time I start a new chapter, it feels disconnected from the previous chapter. It's as if I'm doing a time skip every chapter, even though the next chapter I'm trying to write is on the same day as the previous chapter (in the character's...

Based, cool though

Damn i always start bad and never edit the first chap i do progressive chapters making changes every chapter if my reader started from ch1 till now they will be rewarded by seeing me improve a little or a larger margin per chapter.

My b third language english i dunno how to properly convey this hmm

Like what are u trying to do when i read their story, I would be like Wow this looks promising then next day they'd be all depressed and shit comparing themselves to others.

Pleasseeee, i wuvv you mannn thx for this tutorial As is literally my bff and most hated enemy i didn't know what to do with it i always use it to start chapters now i finally have an idea how to do this sh t

Thanks you've really helped alot on this one.

Thank you for your tutorials ^^

For me i use it because i always Spam the "As" word "As the mc was training bla bla he bla bla" and i use it again 😭 in another space but my english is pretty decent i just dont know how to start scenes and i tend to use the "As" Any tips on this