Recent content by Frank-9976

Take a piss first, #1 tip.

In addition I found when writing my story I wanted to warn for depiction of panic attack but I don't know where that fits. So maybe just a more versatile CW system in general?

This is why I use a laptop and lay on my sofa.

Eh, it's also the madness of men too. Source: the army.

you guys think you know degenerate until you have seen Ao3

plug your story in the forum + story isn't shit = success

Thanks for your feedback! I think from the start I wanted to jump outside of Cody's POV but in retrospect maybe his consistent POV was what gave the otherwise crazy world some grounding. If I write another story I may try to stick to a single POV and use that one to hint at what is beyond...

I think you already found it but for the others here's the thread: https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/my-first-short-story-is-finally-done-6k-words-22-pages.12006/

Now I feel like I used the master ball on a Pidgey.

I once had an OC named Killer Kim. Never really fleshed him out, so this will be his retroactive lore.

Wanna know what I get overly worked up about? The fact you can RATE YOUR OWN STORY. Like, I can't tell if it's like Reddit where you are expected to upvote your own posts, or if it's like YouTube where there's some shame in it. HELP

Holy shirts, this sounds dope as hell, someone tell me if they know of a novel like this.

Nuts, the only reason I am on this website is because my friend uses it. But if I ever want to get better feedback perhaps I should consider moving sites, thank you for your suggestion. You are right, the comments even on my friend's quite successful series are still few and far between, let...

Feedback very much appreciated!

good news I just finished the story