Recent content by Para23

Yay! :blob_melt:

Rip at it 👍✨ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912210/the-pawns-game-theatre-of-death/

Hi, I reworked the synopsis a bit. I wonder if this is a bit better. Synopsis: To the pawn lead on a trail of blood, mystery was an unfair game. Being placed in the body of a supposed murderer, moments after the act, is not a typical situation. And to prove one's innocence after the fact isn't...

Thank you for the feedback! I really do need to work on the synopsis so I’ll see what I can do!

Mind giving mine some feedback? I'm not the best at selling my story with the synopsis to be honest. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912210/the-pawns-game-theatre-of-death/

Hi! Thanks for hosting! I'd like some feedback and criticisms as well, I can definitely benefit from both! You can read up to chapter 4 if you feel like it! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/

I offer mine as tribute https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912210/the-pawns-game-theatre-of-death/

Para the untouchable has appeared! ✨ *cue dramatic smoke bomb* (Your imagination is top notch fr)

What's the horde? Is it food? Can I eat it :blob_cookie:

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback! I went for a mystery type setup before I got to the world building so I’m glad you felt the panic and confusion in a good way! I’ll definitely take your advice on writing more very soon, like I’ll start immediately. Also, the story is more fantasy than I let on...

Heya! Imma drop mine here, read if you want to! Much appreciated! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/

Care to take a look at this? (If you’ve got the time) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/

Hey! Thanks for hosting! I'd appreciate some feedback if you have the time, thank you! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/

Howdy and hello (again lol) I wrote a new novel, and was wondering if you can give some feedback. You can post on thread, thank you! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/

Hehe nice! I'll be giving it a read! Sounds charismatic already *wiggles eyebrows* (its a bad joke I'm sorry lol)