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    Hows my story start

    I've started a third series and think it's looking good so far. I'm a relatively new writer only been going for a month or two excluding the long break I had to take due to personal reasons. Anyways heres the link I've only released the introduction which sets up the series villains and the...
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    Is this okay

    I've taken up writing as a hobby recently and decided to post online as I do want to improve and I know that if anybody can give good criticism it's the internet. Anyways I plan to make the first arc more or less an introduction to ideas, systems, people, and overall themes. I've tried to keep...
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    Hows my first chapter?

    Alright newbie here this is just my attempt at a fantasy adventure story. It's really just an adventure in a typical fantasy world with some of my own made up things or fantasy things I find interesting like a city of puppets or the khabalist who wanted to make a human from scratch. Anyways...
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