Thanks a lot for the feedback. Appreciate it. The sensor thingy was done as part of the comedy, but yeah I realize it gets annoying. Will try to fix things when I'm not busy being a lazy ass.:sweating_profusely:
So i published my first novel - Soul Caller, two weeks ago, and finally got it to over 10k words. Figures now would be a good time to get someone to nitpick every pixel so I can improve.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated, but there are a few specific points I want to focus on:
- Grammar...