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    Writing Just for fun, let's talk about message.

    Yes, i always have a theme and message in mind when i write... My unfinished demon lord novel is about apathy & depression. My novel 'no more nobles' is about the values of democracy VS authoritarianism. My NTR novel ive been working on is about Masculinity. (Specifically about masculinity...
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    Can someone help clarify these things for me?

    Angst a feeling of dread, anxiety, or anguish that is commonly associated with the teenage years. And angsty teenager tends to wallow in these feeling melodramatically, wanting pity from others while also simultaneously wishing to remain tragically misunderstood, much to the annoyance of his...
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    Writing I need help!!!

    if they are superheros then just have them fly to some beautiful location in the wilderness like a waterfall or something
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    Finish The Story: We Can't Be Together

    You finally gathered courage. You're finally going to confess. With a letter in the backpack, you wrote "Meet me on the rooftop," and waited. You were anxious, afraid that no one would show up, but everything went well, at least until now. You said, "I like you! Please go out with me!" "I'm...
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    Finish The Story: We Can't Be Together

    I feel your pain... I have a thing for short haired tomboy girls - I swear, the amount of times I've hit on them and theyre all like 'are you blind dude???' It seems short haired tomboy girls do exist outside of anime, they just dont play for my team...
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    Introduce your character(s) to us!

    I once wrote a short story about a man who killed his lover and was later haunted by a yuki-onna type snow spirit. I purposefully left the reason he killed his lover vague - was it an accident? Was it in the heat of the moment? The man sees his dead lover in a snowstorm and begins chasing...
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    What is your preferred season?

    'I'll be quiet this time' Then why did you bother commenting?
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    What is your preferred season?

    Thanks to global warming, EVERY season besides winter is now summer!!! Winter is now a combination of spring and Autumn! I call it Spritumn!
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    What is your preferred season?

    I am the Winter King, I walk barefoot in snow and my blood is made of ice. I hate sunlight and only love grey skies. I love that feeling when the air is so cold it hurts your lungs just to breathe it in. Snowy landscapes are the most beautiful, and working out in the cold is awesome, you...
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    Writing Bite Size vs Lenghty Chapters

    As a reader, I can say that short chapters are... Unsatisfying. A chapter is like a penis. Most people don't want a tiny three inch one. They don't want to be taken out of the immersion by constantly having to click 'next'. No, people want a Big, Thicc, Girthy chapter that satisfies them...
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    Are there any font you feel is relieving to the eyes to read?

    i also like this one. i use basic text documents to write my notes, and that is the basic font it gives you. I also like how it looks like writing from a typewriter - could be a good font for a noir crime thriller
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    I just finished some novel cover commission

    i think the eyelashes are quite good actually. It seems to be part of your style. So unlike that guy, i think they are just fine. Some things are a matter of personal preferance, not skill. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder as they say
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    I just finished some novel cover commission

    I love the cool watercolor style. I like the way its faded yet pops out to the eye. I only have one critique, and its that the blue haired girl's eye is a touch too large - but i suppose thats anime girls for ya! Fantastic work - it has soul Edit: here is a couple pictures showcasing...
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