I just finished some novel cover commission

[linnil]

It's the first time I did some novel cover. ^0^//
I am the reader myself but no one have never commissioin me for their novel cover before.
Finally!! Finally someone hire me for this!!
I shall show this work proudly here. he he.
You can critique me so that I can try to improve more on this.
(I already fix some text alignment from critique comment on reddit though but if there is more to fix why not?)

 

[NotaNuffian]

It's the first time I did some novel cover. ^0^//
I am the reader myself but no one have never commissioin me for their novel cover before.
Finally!! Finally someone hire me for this!!
I shall show this work proudly here. he he.
You can critique me so that I can try to improve more on this.
(I already fix some text alignment from critique comment on reddit though but if there is more to fix why not?)
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Boobies!

Love the pink nipples.

 

[linnil]

Boobies!

Love the pink nipples.

Client request cup C and D respectively. But normally I like to draw board chest.

 

[K5Rakitan]

Wild!

 

[NotaNuffian]

Client request cup C and D respectively. But normally I like to draw board chest.

Love breasts. They are perfect at any size

 

[Succubiome]

The angle of hand/fingers where they're holding hands looks a bit awkward to me somehow, but I had to look for a fair bit to see it?

Overall, looks like a very solid composition to me.

 

[StrongArm]

I love the cool watercolor style. I like the way its faded yet pops out to the eye. I only have one critique, and its that the blue haired girl's eye is a touch too large - but i suppose thats anime girls for ya!

Fantastic work - it has soul

Edit: here is a couple pictures showcasing anime side eye - i dont think yours is far off in comparison, just a size too large

 

[lininart]

I love the cool watercolor style. I like the way its faded yet pops out to the eye. I only have one critique, and its that the blue haired girl's eye is a touch too large - but i suppose thats anime girls for ya!

Fantastic work - it has soul

Edit: here is a couple pictures showcasing anime side eye - i dont think yours is far off in comparison, just a size too large
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Oh! thank for the eye reference!!

 

[Lodur]

You have your own style (it's the greatest achievement, especially nowadays). But please, do something with their eyelashes! They are eyelashes, not fuzzy caterpillars!

 

[lininart]

You have your own style (it's the greatest achievement, especially nowadays). But please, do something with their eyelashes! They are eyelashes, not fuzzy caterpillars!

Hmm? Did the eye lash that bad?

 

[StrongArm]

Hmm? Did the eye lash that bad?

i think the eyelashes are quite good actually. It seems to be part of your style. So unlike that guy, i think they are just fine. Some things are a matter of personal preferance, not skill. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder as they say

 

[lininart]

i think the eyelashes are quite good actually. It seems to be part of your style. So unlike that guy, i think they are just fine. Some things are a matter of personal preferance, not skill. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder as they say

Ah... thank you for your kind word.