Recent content by UndyingEmbers

That looks amazing! I wish I had an awesome cover like that for my story as well. You're very talented! :)

I usually try to respond to comments for my stories most of the time. I don't answer if it's something that would require me to reveal spoilers, and I try really hard to not engage in exchanging comments if someone posts something extremely negative. However, I always reply to people who are...

I like the first one. Wish I had the talent to draw a map for my story lol. Nice work!

I'd like to also request this feature. It'd be nice to know when I have chapters to read.

This is the first story that I worked on. I've let the project stall a bit since I've been focused on my other work, but I really enjoyed this one and I'll probably go back to it sometime in the future. The story is called Breaker and here is the first chapter:

Usually I spend the early time in the mornings before my kids wake up to relax and write. I find that having quiet time helps me focus. A lot of times I'm thinking about where my story is going to go while I am going about my day, so when I find a little time to write, it's just a matter of...

For my latest story, The Necromancer and the Would-Be-Hero, the inspiration was that I wanted to create a villain story that had deep characters. What is it exactly that made her turn into the person she is? What are her motivations? Why does she decide to take on a sentient familiar rather than...

I honestly wonder about this too... I look at my stories and never know if people just read one chapter bookmark it and decide they didn't like it, or if they're saving up. As a reader, I usually bookmark something I'm interested in after reading the first chapter and then over a few days I try...

The way I see it is that there are a few reasons to have mutli-protag and to do different POV, but either way, I highly encourage the style of switching by chapter if possible. The way I use it, and I'm far from an expert, is to show protagonists who are far apart, show a different person's...

I see. That's pretty interesting. You could probably just rewrite that last part to make it clearer somehow. Overall, if you do write more, I'll be sure to check it out. ^_^

I think it's well written and could be interested. There was some repetitiveness that I felt while reading through it and I'm not sure how I feel about his eyes constantly changing colors, but maybe that'd be explained later on. The thing I was most confused about is that he says he cannot turn...

Thank you so much for the detailed advice! It really makes a huge difference to see that short and sweet is better than a long detailed description that gives away the whole prologue. I hadn't been sure on how to approach this without giving any major spoilers, but this style of synopsis looks...

I read the prologue and although I have never read a cultivation story, I can say that I found the story to be very well written and interesting. Your grammar is great and I like the style that you use to make up your paragraphs. Keep up the awesome work! I'm sure that I'll keep reading!

Hi, everyone! I started a new story recently, and I'm really struggling with coming up with a good description it. The primary genres are isekai and fantasy. I'm hoping that some of you might be able to read the first chapter as well as the blurb that I have come up with so far in order to help...

I thought I'd throw my two cents in here in hopes that you will continue to try and not give up on writing your story. First, the positive is that there is some potential for an interesting Isekai story here. Ian is taken to another world and has his powers awakened, and he will go on a...