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The Royal Princess is a Sadist The premise in a nutshell: A certain princess indulges in the pleasure of sadism to fulfill her twisted desires, and in its own somewhat twisted and ironic way, for the good of others. It's really quite self explanatory. I'd just like some first impressions on...

Heyo, it's me, a person who doesn't know what to do. To sum things up, I've just finished the first arc of my story, Cata Maestra. At this point, I'm stuck between the options of rewriting, editing, or just moving on. To go in a bit more in depth, I have just completed the Forest Arc, which...

The Loner Witch and the Troubles of Society Genre: Action, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy, Slice of Life Synopsis: Being an immortal witch can come with many benefits. Some of these include not aging, immense power, and everything else you might expect. Unfortunately, an incomprehensibly long...

Hey, I recently just started working on a fantasy story that you can find here. Right now, I've only got one chapter done. But obviously, first impressions are important, right? So I want to have my first chapter critiqued and analyzed so I can 1. fix it up and 2. fix up later chapters. The...