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    Hows The first chapter of my thing

    Thankyou I'll go ahead and delete this thread and repost it and yes I was going for a more sophisticated fuck you to cliches that piss me off. Thankyou for the advice and the whole (...) was to make fun of how sometimed dramatic shit doesn't really warrant silence silence...I read way to many...
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    Hows The first chapter of my thing

    Edit:Okay I was told I posted this in the wrong thing my bad. Its just a rewrite of a novel I dropped due to some unfortunate circumstances but I felt like bringing it back with a fresh new coat of paint. Anyways here ya go...
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    Why? What makes you want to write? What is your "Writer's Creed"?

    It was originally a way to deal with my shit mental health but after a while I found it fun to make my own little words and spread them around. Now it's just a hobby I really enjoy and am dedicated to though I usually got fuck all time
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    Need help working out a charector idea

    I have no clue what you said but the collar thing seems like a good idea I'll just use the blue collar as one of sloths tools or something like that and sorry but could you be more clear. All advice and criticisms are welcome as I wish to improve as a writer and sorry if I made things confusing...
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    Need help working out a charector idea

    Okay so put it simply I want to discuss an idea I have. In the thing I'm writing the demons divine weapons who have their own personality and influence whoever's they are attached to are based off the seven deadly sins. Here it is https://www.scribblehub.com/series/66102/a-strangers-story/...
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    Im back and looking for advice

    Thank you very much for the advice it was the first thing I wrote seriously and to be honest I regret leaving it. I will take your advice to heart as I write the continuing chapters
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    Im back and looking for advice

    Alright a while ago I began writing a series and dropped it shortly after it started due to unfortunate circumstances. Anyways I'm looking for ways to improve further since during my time off I practiced my writing. Chapters 1-7 are when I started and chapter 8 is well hopefully better than...
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