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Please bear with my meh story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/522359/so-i-got-a-sword/

"Big daddy meat lord"

Yeah I was going for more of a slice of life with a bit of drama spiced into it. Always sucked at descriptions/outright ignored them so yeah, never was able to add them much in conversations and otherwise. Been trying to improve but I still suck ass. Anyways, thank you for your time.

It's my first first time writing but hopefully it ain't too bad... hopefully. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/522359/so-i-got-a-sword/

Thank you very much. I'll keep that in mind for later chapters

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/522359/so-i-got-a-sword/ Here's mine, in all honesty it's probably pretty bad but I want to know how to improve.

Hi, I just wanted to ask for feedback for my story about a girl who found a sword that can talk. It's more or less just a slice of life story about a girl and her new friend trying to pass school, with a few nonsensical conversations and some more meaningful and maybe making a friend and not...