Lazy_Acorn
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Hello my friends, as the title says, I come here for advice about multiple points of view.
I am currently writing a story here at SH, but before posting it, I had some ideas and even wrote some drafts. After a lot of indecision (partly because I didn't want to leave aside the powers and characters that I had so much work to create), I decided to somehow bring them all together in the same world, but with one having the main focus and the others appearing occasionally, having the point of view focused on them.
What I wanted to know is, having multiple POV in my story could affect it negatively?
I ask this because after a survey on the internet, I found that many people hate this.
As a matter of curiosity, I will leave here a short resume of the drafts I had written.
Going by the order of ideas I wrote.
First, Isekai where the MC has the ability to tame monsters, and the only monsters he managed to tame were a goblin and a slime.
Second, Isekai where the MC is transmigrated into a village of Gorgons in order to help them give birth, and occasionally explore the forest when he was not 'enjoying the youth'.
Third, Isekai where the MC is a dungeon master, he ‘enjoys the youth’ while trying to stay as strong as possible in order to not be killed by adventurers.
Fourth, Isekai with an intelligent and manipulative female MC, she would use her skills to create her empire and show that even being a woman in a medieval European world, she could reach the top.
Fifth, a slice of life of a OP guy who falls in love with a prostitute in a fantasy world. (It was the one I chose as the main focus, since I thought it was a little more original than the others)
Sixth, was in the modern days, post-pandemic world, where almost everyone gains skills and the MC who is in love with his aunt gains a system, he 'enjoys the youth' while occasionally going to dungeons.
Seventh, isekai Slice of life where the MC is very OP and reincarnates as the butler of a rich little girl.
Thanks in advance
I am currently writing a story here at SH, but before posting it, I had some ideas and even wrote some drafts. After a lot of indecision (partly because I didn't want to leave aside the powers and characters that I had so much work to create), I decided to somehow bring them all together in the same world, but with one having the main focus and the others appearing occasionally, having the point of view focused on them.
What I wanted to know is, having multiple POV in my story could affect it negatively?
I ask this because after a survey on the internet, I found that many people hate this.
As a matter of curiosity, I will leave here a short resume of the drafts I had written.
Going by the order of ideas I wrote.
First, Isekai where the MC has the ability to tame monsters, and the only monsters he managed to tame were a goblin and a slime.
Second, Isekai where the MC is transmigrated into a village of Gorgons in order to help them give birth, and occasionally explore the forest when he was not 'enjoying the youth'.
Third, Isekai where the MC is a dungeon master, he ‘enjoys the youth’ while trying to stay as strong as possible in order to not be killed by adventurers.
Fourth, Isekai with an intelligent and manipulative female MC, she would use her skills to create her empire and show that even being a woman in a medieval European world, she could reach the top.
Fifth, a slice of life of a OP guy who falls in love with a prostitute in a fantasy world. (It was the one I chose as the main focus, since I thought it was a little more original than the others)
Sixth, was in the modern days, post-pandemic world, where almost everyone gains skills and the MC who is in love with his aunt gains a system, he 'enjoys the youth' while occasionally going to dungeons.
Seventh, isekai Slice of life where the MC is very OP and reincarnates as the butler of a rich little girl.
Thanks in advance