BL/LGBT/Fantasy Story Looking for Feedback

[histo-shizuka]

Hello! As the title says, I'm looking for some honest feedback. Or whatever critiques you have to offer.
Responses preferred in message/conversation, but whatever works for you.

In return, I wouldn't mind checking out your story and giving some honest feedback as well. :)

Here's mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/493786/the-dark-prince/

Thank you!

 

[SK123]

I'll be up for a review swap! Mine's only a fantasy and I'll read four chapters of your work because mine is only one chapter since it just got released is that okay?

If it is okay, then here's mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/515091/sword-king/

 

[histo-shizuka]

I'll be up for a review swap! Mine's only a fantasy and I'll read four chapters of your work because mine is only one chapter since it just got released is that okay?

If it is okay, then here's mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/515091/sword-king/

Sounds good to me. I’ll check it out in a little bit!

 

[tiaf]

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[ZeroX0666]

Hello! As the title says, I'm looking for some honest feedback. Or whatever critiques you have to offer.
Responses preferred in message/conversation, but whatever works for you.

In return, I wouldn't mind checking out your story and giving some honest feedback as well. :)

Here's mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/493786/the-dark-prince/

Thank you!

Interesting, will do it soon.

 

[histo-shizuka]

Interesting, will do it soon.

Thank you!