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[Nevafrost]

Mine is still under re-editing.But,here you go...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1052102/the-truth-is-mysterious/

 

[quagma]

I'll toss mine into the mix.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/856622/spookshifted/

 

[DJ_Rhaposdy]

Mine are still a work in progress (especially Fragmented Blade), but I'd love some feedback for either/both.

Former Isekai Hero was Corrupted by His Over-Poweredness, and Now the People Need Me, a Prince of this World, to Defeat Him and Save Our Land

That boy was supposed to save our world from the wrath of the Demon King. And while the King is dead, an even worse threat has arisen: the boy himself! I don't know how he came to this world, but I'm going to be the one to take him out...

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Fragmented Blade

Vol. 1 Noel Miller is a fourteen-year-old girl from small-town America. After the sudden death of her parents, she and her young brother are forced to move across the world to live with their aunt in Tokyo, Japan. Having to learn to live in a foreign land is hard enough, but...

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[Dcpreit]

Still there? This is my story!
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1063229/bloodlines-concoction/ Thanks a lot in advance

 

[MasFaqih]

Hello every nyaa omagaaa iam a new author so, care to give me some feedback? Here my new story

 

[NOTkaosin21]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/646791/i-can-copy-skills-with-a-system-in-another-world-litrpg-isekai/

thanks

 

[JustKidding]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1066243/i-can-infinitely-respawn/

if youre still alive