Misako
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hi, I'm here to ask a question that's making it difficult for me to write novels
My characters and supporting characters already have their own names
but when i add a new character, i really have a hard time making the scene of the meeting with the new character, for example when they meet and then fight
I always use sentences that I think are really bad to read, like "The bald man jumped and then hit leon right in front of the Queen"
I think it's the worst writing I've ever written
and the last part that irritated me was when I wrote "Leon approached the bald man who was lying weakly on the palace floor, then the bald man stood up and the bald man drew his sword"
I don't know how to make a good and appropriate sentence to describe the part in the character that has not been named
can you help me solve this problem? Your advice is very valuable for me who is a beginner novel writer
My characters and supporting characters already have their own names
but when i add a new character, i really have a hard time making the scene of the meeting with the new character, for example when they meet and then fight
I always use sentences that I think are really bad to read, like "The bald man jumped and then hit leon right in front of the Queen"
I think it's the worst writing I've ever written
and the last part that irritated me was when I wrote "Leon approached the bald man who was lying weakly on the palace floor, then the bald man stood up and the bald man drew his sword"
I don't know how to make a good and appropriate sentence to describe the part in the character that has not been named
can you help me solve this problem? Your advice is very valuable for me who is a beginner novel writer