Consider this effect: The man is woken up.
And this cause: A brick is thrown through the man's window.
What's better:
- The mans eyes snapped open (effect) as the brick was thrown through his window (cause).
- The brick smashed through the mans window (cause), waking him with a start (effect).
Are there any writing rules, or rules of thumb you use to determine which order to write in? Does it change depending on the scene?
Your Journalistic/Essay/Report writing is showing:
- The mans eyes snapped open (effect) as the brick was thrown through his window (cause).
When writing an Essay, or reading a Report in the News,
What Happened is the first thing that gets mentioned because What Happened is the most Important part of the report.
- A man was awakened in the middle of the night!
HOW it Happened is secondary and what fills in the meat of the Report.
- A brick was thrown through the window.
The final paragraph of an Essay, or closing remarks in a Report addresses WHY this Report is important to the readers or listeners.
- Brick-thrower still at large! YOU could be next!
THIS is how we are all taught to write in school because Essay Writing is how one writes for Newspapers, Magazines, Businesses, and College classes.
Remember: School is to prepare you for Work at a Business or for attending College -- not for a career as an Author.
This is also how one generally Tells a Story
orally to one's friends and neighbors.
- "Joe totally flopped that pass in last weeks football game! This is how it happened..."
Fairy tales are also told in this way because fairy tales were originally Spoken NOT Written. They were Oral Tales. They were written the way the collectors, (the Brothers' Grimm,) were Told them.
- Once upon a time there was a boy who knew no fear.
THIS is NOT how one Writes fiction.
The #1 Most Common cause of Confusion in Action sequences...?
Putting the Reaction [Effect]
BEFORE the Action [Cause].
ACTION Sequences = Chronological Order
Chronological Order --
the order in which things actually happen-- is the ONLY way to write an Action Scene that won't
confuse your readers. If you visualize the characters doing something in a specific order,
write it in THAT order.
- The flash of pain exploded in my cheek from the slap her hand lashed out at me.
- -- WRONG!
Why is this wrong?
-- If you were watching this scene as a movie, that sentence is NOT how you would have seen it happen.
Actual Sequence of events:
1) Her hand lashed out in a slap. [Cause]
2) A flash of pain exploded in her cheek [Effect]
WHY is this Important?
Stories = Mental Movies
The reader always Imagines what you Write in the exact order they Read it.
If you write the sequence of events Backwards --
how reports and essays are written-- the reader has to re-read that whole line, or paragraph, or
page all over again to correct their Mental-Movie and Re-Imagine what's going on in the Correct Order of Events.
If the Reader is forced to do this too much, they will drop your story to go find one easier to Imagine.
NEVER FORGET: Readers read stories for
Pleasure,
Enjoyment, and
Entertainment. If you make it hard for your Readers to Imagine what you've written,
why should they bother reading it? (I certainly wouldn't.)
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