Prince_Azmiran_Myrian
πBurns you with his Loveπ
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Welcome to my Lair
My ordained drakes give you hospitality.
Here, I will judge you.
Things you should know before you submit:My ordained drakes give you hospitality.
Here, I will judge you.
- I am not a good author
- I dislike reading
- It may take time for me to give you feedback, I am a slow reader.
- I currently only use a mobile phone
- Your story must be on scribblehub
- For now, I have no other restrictions on stories I'll accept
- Don't take my feedback too seriously.
I am doing this to procrastinate writing my own story and to perhaps get some ideas or inspiration while getting better at writing myself.
Appraisal system
Treasure - This is going in my Hoard
Well Done - Good to consume
Questionable -is questionable, caution should be exercised.
Intrusive Thoughts - Warning, may tempt readers into bad behavior
Toxic -Dangerous to consume, bad for the soul
Purge Necessary - I need to send an ordained drake to purge you of your iniquity
Well Done - Good to consume
Questionable -is questionable, caution should be exercised.
Intrusive Thoughts - Warning, may tempt readers into bad behavior
Toxic -Dangerous to consume, bad for the soul
Purge Necessary - I need to send an ordained drake to purge you of your iniquity
My main concern with doing these reviews is the spirit of the story I am reading. I may be able to spot some writing issues but my primary Very True Biased Prideful Dragon Judgement will more focus on the ideas I see in the story and the spirit behind them.
Or at least, that is what I hope to focus on, I am not-experienced in this.
Procedure
- YOU submit a link to your story, I cannot see your signature.
- I will read as far as I wish. Understand this may take some time as I dislike reading. In the order of link received.
- I will post a reply here on this thread with my review. This may or may not be helpful for you.
- Leave knowing the you have been lovingly judged. (You may reply to my review don't worry)
I thank you for submitting the work you have taken time to put your heart and soul into for my humble-proud judgement.
I shall end with a prayer for you and I:
May our minds be willing, our hearts softened, our ways made right in the sight of God.
Seeking Christ, for he is the creator of us all, having written all things and justified us to the father, that we may inherit the kingdom of heaven.
May we repent of our ways, and follow His ways which are perfect and excellent.
May we be humble before God, the greatest author in existence. Amen.
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