Writing Prompt Envy's Poem Thread

Voidiris

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The electric mind
taken
rated
behaved
thinking of so many thoughts
deprived miserable pieces
insight of your heart
You have ascended when the verdict comes
the complacency takes you down
in hollow minds
the emotional side so emotional
your life is controlled by digest
they don't want to hear
the vile heart is so deprived
the heart makes one plus one two
when hepiness comes.
Can't you see the hurt
the sound has rotten
everything inside
You beg to die inside
to never feel again.
The minds desired
freedom
it wants
hate
it has
It despises this feable hearts
of mine for existing
it might have no control
but who would ever care about logic
but the mind
it's pity party unending
it believes to be cynical
but it never understood the self
it wants to abandon humanity
living so logical.
It knows the heart is so foul,
it feels so much pain and fear,
Nobody should want to have it.
The soul is crying
it wants to murder them both
for tormenting itself everyday
the father failed us
the mother failed us
the arrogance of
heart
mind
the soul is holy
a king
so glorious
It knows the pains need to end.
They will tear themself apart
upside down
I am me
I am not me
I give it all I got
and see me fail
over and over
again
understanding
What's behind my eyes
I struggle
to walk
to talk
to think
to remember
I will forget
anything.
laughing without sense
The tides turn
the personalities die
Theres no you when
there's no control.
 

RepresentingEnvy

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Early have come the Summer Blues
The yearly sad tunes of vampires weeping
This seeping heat and madness of the sun
From head to feet, we feel the sadness

Even in spring, I feel the Summer Blues
And so, I sing as the blue is blooming
Only during the moon's ring as the night's blooming
Is when the respite comes at last

Coming fast is the Summer Blues
So early, and maybe the last of lonely tunes
It's yearly but lasts far too long, like church pews
This echoing and singing Summer Blues
 

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The voices still fade
The past was just now
But a touch away
Forever ago yet somehow
And the ghosts continue to linger
In the house of thoughts in my heart
It was over so quick, and still ringing
Songs we have sung no longer will start
 

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Long ago, I started to inspire
Delivering poems as a witchpire
There was a spark and then a fire
I lit the forums ablaze like a lighter

But they weren't enough, so I strived higher
Hoping of poems, I'd never tire
If I said I did, I'd be a liar
My love for them is immortal like a vampire
 

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You're gay
hey!
I'm not gay I'm just friendly
you know, making friends? It's kinda trendy.
And one thing you can't say is that trendy's not about tendy.
you are gay though
which is rather inclusive
For this thread of losers
writing poems, abusing
the readers with poor rhyme schemes
without any set theme


And now I'm all fired up
Finna write some poems to kill for
Cause it's fine to write about blood
Enough to fill all bananafish stores
What the hell is wrong with people
Most of them never even held a gun
Yet they write like they'd make some ripples
In the local news about serial fun
This great witch is tired of reading
These views of would be killers
If they had guts they'd meeting
Satan after work instead of writing filler

Okay, good thoughts,
kind thoughts
No more
No less.
Mountain tops,
Sea shores,
yacht hops,
letting live and letting go -
God bless.
Spring days,
Summers nights,
Love fades
never dies.
Future calls,
Past waves
Meet a friend
Give a hand
And they roll
by, the days
 
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hey!
I'm not gay I'm just friendly
you know, making friends? It's kinda trendy.
And one thing you can't say is that trendy's not about tendy.
you are gay though
which is rather inclusive
For this thread of losers
writing poems, abusing
the readers with poor rhyme schemes
without any set theme


And now I'm all fired up
Finna write some poems to kill for
Cause it's fine to write about blood
Enough to fill all bananafish stores
What the hell is wrong with people
Most of them never even held a gun
Yet they write like they'd make some ripples
In the local news about serial fun
This great witch is tired of reading
These views of would be killers
If they had guts they'd meeting
Satan after work instead of writing filler

Okay, good thoughts,
kind thoughts
No more
No less.
Mountain tops,
Sea shores,
yacht hops,
letting live and letting go -
God bless.
Spring days,
Summers nights,
Love fades
never dies.
Future calls,
Past waves
Meet a friend
Give a hand
And they roll
by, the days
Sayin' I ain't got no theme when I'm rhymin'
But that's your whacked up dream, 'n ya lyin'
You don't want to get in a battle, 'n start riddlin'
My flows are like the cream, 'n it's the icin'
On the cake for you fools before you dyin'
But as I spit, don't get to cryin'
But you said there's no theme, so I do it again
Time to explain my raps and then tell it like it is
So, I'll do exactly as you wish
This next ones about guns, so pay attention
Stay there, and stay bitchin' while I mention
You sayin' I ain't held a gun befo
But that's a lie fo sho and ya acin' like ya didn't know
But I've riddle mo things in bullet holes
Than Dracula could Count
More than years you been alive that's a plentiful amount
So before I leave you down and out for the count
I will spray some more at your head
Better duck before the words 'ill kill you
And hide in ya bed
Trust me, you wouldn't wanna wound up dead
 

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Sayin' I ain't got no theme when I'm rhymin'
But that's your whacked up dream, 'n ya lyin'
You don't want to get in a battle, 'n start riddlin'
My flows are like the cream, 'n it's the icin'
On the cake for you fools before you dyin'
But as I spit, don't get to cryin'
But you said there's no theme, so I do it again
Time to explain my raps and then tell it like it is
So, I'll do exactly as you wish
This next ones about guns, so pay attention
Stay there, and stay bitchin' while I mention
You sayin' I ain't held a gun befo
But that's a lie fo sho and ya acin' like ya didn't know
But I've riddle mo things in bullet holes
Than Dracula could Count
More than years you been alive that's a plentiful amount
So before I leave you down and out for the count
I will spray some more at your head
Better duck before the words 'ill kill you
And hide in ya bed
Trust me, you wouldn't wanna wound up dead
Well that's a wrap, so hard to read
Ringing my notifs, polluting the feed
Better feed the poor with this kid of sport
Cause ya rhymes killing it?
More like you taking off their life support.
You drinking blood? Cause you don't got milk
That's why you're acting fatherless, just like your ilk
I've been killing it before your species was born
And long after it's dead, I'll still be killing it, worm.
 

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Well that's a wrap, so hard to read
Ringing my notifs, polluting the feed
Better feed the poor with this kid of sport
Cause ya rhymes killing it?
More like you taking off their life support.
You drinking blood? Cause you don't got milk
That's why you're acting fatherless, just like your ilk
I've been killing it before your species was born
And long after it's dead, I'll still be killing it, worm.
You can't read it?
Do you need your glasses?
I forgot you are old and brittle
So I got to keep it to simple spittle
Now, I'm rhyming like you, really simply
When you got rhymes this basic
You ain't no enemy
More like a freinemy
You're right about ending it with a wrap
Cuz your disses are softer than bubblewrap
 

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You can't read it?
Do you need your glasses?
I forgot you are old and brittle
So I got to keep it to simple spittle
Now, I'm rhyming like you really simply
When you got rhymes this basic
You ain't no enemy
More like a freinemy
You're right about ending it with a wrap
Cuz your disses are softer than bubblewrap
Did you just rhyme wrap and wrap?
Is this who wants to fight me with rap?
I am never dissing you, kid, I'm just stating facts
Fact is, yes I am indeed to old for this crap.
It's like entertaining a grandchild
You're a shitty brat, yes, but it ain't no fight
 

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Did you just rhyme wrap and wrap?
Is this who wants to fight me with rap?
I am never dissing you, kid, I'm just stating facts
Fact is, yes I am indeed to old for this crap.
It's like entertaining a grandchild
You're a shitty brat, yes, but it ain't no fight
I rhymed that way as a mockery
For your words that are like nursery
You are too old and decrepit for in-lines
So I spoonfeed you like a baby, real simple and fine
Open up for these words really big, here comes the airplane
Granny, you should really stay in your lane
 

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I rhymed that way as a mockery
For your words that are like nursery
You are too old and decrepit for in-lines
So I spoonfeed you like a baby, real simple and fine
Open up for these words really big, here comes the airplane
Granny, you should really stay in your lane
Sure sure wiwwle Envie
You rhymed as you intended
Let's aaaall agree you meant it
Combined with all the evidence
I rule it as defended
 

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Sure sure wiwwle Envie
You rhymed as you intended
Let's aaaall agree you meant it
Combined with all the evidence
I rule it as defended
Bzzzz, the airplanes coming
Can't you hear the buzzing?
Ah, no, that's just your raps
They are like fly attacks
Humming in my ear
Like when you hold babies in your rocking chair
I will go to sleep as your words rock me
They hit me, but they do it softly
 

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My words do rock Queens
Hey, sport, don't hope to win
Fighting me is impossible
Do like a tree and play possum, kid
If you get mad then you got no wit
You will be flat if I roll you with
My lines, but it will be quick
 

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My words do rock Queens
Hey, sport, don't hope to win
Fighting me is impossible
Do like a tree and play possum, kid
If you get mad then you got no wit
You will be flat if I roll you with
My lines, but it will be quick
You couldn't roll anything even if you were makin' bread
It's time for you to pay the toll of pencil lead
You fool, don't deny my street cred
Pay homage to the best of the best before it gets to your head
I'm way up here on my throne, and you are below me
You can't even hope to dis me homie
Taking shots at the queen, that's a foul play
Keep goin', and you will rue this day
It will be off with your head, lese majeste
A coffin will be your tomb to lay
 

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I stood afar, observing the two primates.
They are indeed exotic.
But they are chaotic.
And each has a dangerous addict.
I would love to only sit.
Without needing to worry about the damage spread by them.
The damage done is not my problem, it's theirs.
Your stuff, your problem. Don't involve others without consent.
My words do rock Queens
Hey, sport, don't hope to win
Fighting me is impossible
Do like a tree and play possum, kid
If you get mad then you got no wit
You will be flat if I roll you with
My lines, but it will be quick

You couldn't roll anything even if you were makin' bread
It's time for you to pay the toll of pencil lead
You fool, don't deny my street cred
Pay homage to the best of the best before it gets to your head
I'm way up here on my throne, and you are below me
You can't even hope to dis me homie
Taking shots at the queen, that's a foul play
Keep goin', and you will rue this day
It will be off with your head, lese majeste
A coffin will be your tomb to lay
 

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You couldn't roll anything even if you were makin' bread
It's time for you to pay the toll of pencil lead
You fool, don't deny my street cred
Pay homage to the best of the best before it gets to your head
I'm way up here on my throne, and you are below me
You can't even hope to dis me homie
Taking shots at the queen, that's a foul play
Keep goin', and you will rue this day
It will be off with your head, lese majeste
A coffin will be your tomb to lay
Awww so cute- whose a cyuuute wiwwle bat?
I mean I'll loot your castle after I roll it flat
"Roar", I say, as I make scary gestures
For to this day you are nothing but a jester
Queens? Kings? Trumps? Jokers?
Do you think we're here playing poker?
Like ranks mean shit to evil witches
Kingdoms turn to meat when my stomach itches
You wanna lay me inside a coffin? Or put it me in a tomb?
For a vampire you're nothing I've ever known.
To start with an innuendo of all things
It's harassment friend, that's what it means.
But I'm not into kids, even when they're undead
So I'll close your lid and fill you with led
I stood afar, observing the two primates.
They are indeed exotic.
But they are chaotic.
And each has a dangerous addict.
I would love to only sit.
Without needing to worry about the damage spread by them.
The damage done is not my problem, it's theirs.
Your stuff, your problem. Don't involve others without consent.
tsundere
 
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Let's end this cuz I really need to write
Otherwise, I'll procrastinate till tomorrow night
So, instead of taking a bite, I will take flight
I don't care who's in the right
And no, this ain't me runnin'
Cuz this chapter, I have been puttin' off
And that's just me bein' lazy
Trust me, this shit is crazy :sweating_profusely::sweating_profusely::sweating_profusely:
 

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Let's end this cuz I really need to write
Otherwise, I'll procrastinate till tomorrow night
So, instead of taking a bite, I will take flight
I don't care who's in the right
And no, this ain't me runnin'
Cuz this chapter, I have been puttin' off
And that's just me bein' lazy
Trust me, this shit is crazy :sweating_profusely::sweating_profusely::sweating_profusely:
I was just playing with a cat and a duck
So it's okay if you write, I won't be giving a... quack
Have fun writing stuff, and all that
To those two, I'll go feed more bread
 
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