Elateam
Fish and Chips Salesperson
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Hello! I just started writing "A Tale From Azad" but I need some feedback. Turns out people can get 1-star review from just two chapters, so I think something might be wrong with the way I'm writing my story, or maybe that I was trolled by some kid considering all the other latest series also suffered a one-star review overnight, who knows. Might be the small info-dump in Chapter 1 or maybe the lack of emotion in dialogue or possibly the character names (but I kind of doubt that one). Whatever the case, I feel like a pair of fresh eyes is what would be best. The link to the book is https://www.scribblehub.com/series/34969/a-tale-from-azad/ . Hopefully it isn't as bad as I think it is, but we'll just have to see. Thanks!