Writing Prompt Finish The Story: "What Is Your Name?"

SomethingStuffHappend

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After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't everyday that a person did something like that for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"
"I'm John Done and I am done with this long series of events, conflicts, and character developments I can do without."
"... What? W-what do--"
"Goodbye."
*walks away*

So ends the story of John Done, A guy who is done with everything.
“If only it was that easy John Doe”
Click
“Biscuits sends her regards”
BANG
 

AliceShiki

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"I am he who does not allow evil!
"The champion of justice...
"The great Saiyaman!" *insert cool pose here*
 

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After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't every day that a person did something like that for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"
"Dr. Raymond.. mam"

"God bless you, my child. No one ever cared about this old lady so much."

"No mam, we are just doing our job here."

You keep chatting to the old grandma as you check her blood pressure and instruct the nurse about the next dosage.
 

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After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't everyday that a person did something like that for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"

It seemed she realised the familiar features on your face.

You scratched your head. Your smile pushed the eyelids shut.

Better not let her know what you would say would be a lie or not.

"I don't really have name so just call me whatever you want."

"..." She fell into the awkward silence.

"I have to go now. Good bye."

"Will-will we-"

"Ah. I am not around here. I am a traveler. I will be onto the next country by next week. I don't think we will meet again."

"uhm."

"Just stay safe, ok?" Your eyes wanted to pull the her entire face into memory, embracing it with all your might. It was a miracle to meet her but you got to go now. "Farewell."

"Uhm. Good bye."


You met your mother. You were satisfied.

"Genie. Thank you. Please remove the fetus now."

With the fetus out of her womb, she wouldn't have to suffer her entire life. That fetus was just a mistake, a crime of a rapist. It didn't need to exist. Its disappearance would bring happiness to two people.

"Thanks, mother... for trying your best. You don't have to suffer any longer."

His form faded away.

"May your future... be bright."
 
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After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't everyday that a person did something like that for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"

It seemed she realised the familiar features on your face.

You scratched your head. Your smile pushed the eyelids shut.

Better not let her know what you would say would be a lie or not.

"I don't really have name so just call me whatever you want."

"..." She fell into the awkward silence.

"I have to go now. Good bye."

"Will-will we-"

"Ah. I am not around here. I am a traveler. I will be onto the next country by next week. I don't think we will meet again."

"uhm."

"Just stay safe, ok?" Your eyes wanted to pull the her entire face into memory, embracing it with all your might. It was a miracle to meet her but you got to go now. "Farewell."

"Uhm. Good bye."


You met your mother. You were satisfied.

"Genie. Thank you. Please remove the fetus now."

With the fetus out of her womb, she wouldn't have to suffer her entire life. That fetus was just a mistake, a crime from rapist. It didn't need to exist. Its disappearance would bring happiness to two people.

"Thanks, mother... for trying your best. You don't have to suffer any longer."

His form faded away.

"May your future... be bright."
holy shit...
the fetus thing was kind of weird but the end was really good
 

Raymann

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Try number 2.....

After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't everyday that a person did something like that for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"

You reply in your manly voice:

"I AM BRUCE....SHIT. BATMAN."
 
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Try number 2.....

After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't everyday that a person did something like that for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"

You reply in your manly voice:

"I AM BRUCE....SHIT. BATMAN."
that would definitely happen to me...
 

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“Wouldn Uleye Tanoe”

“…wouldn’t you like to know? Of course I do I just asked you, you, you, you SMART ALEC!”

She stomped off without a moment’s hesitation, the explanation dying on your lips.

“Thanks a lot, dad” you whisper tiredly, the venom all but worn away over the years, but still hoping he hears you from wherever he is. You kick your worn out boots against the ground, counting the days until you can legally change your name.
 

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After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't everyday that a person did something like that for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"
You put on your best "I'm too cool to be interested" face as you casually introduce yourself. "My name is..."

And then, like the true linguistic master you are, you unleash a tongue-twister marathon with flawless precision, "Jugemu Jugemu Go-Kō-no-Surikire Kaijari-suigyo no Suigyō-matsu Unrai-matsu Fūrai-matsu Kū-Neru Tokoro ni Sumu Tokoro Yaburakōji no Burakōji Paipo Paipo Paipo no Shūringan Shūringan no Gūrindai Gūrindai no Ponpokopii no Ponpokonaa no Chōkyūmei no Chōsuke."

You exit the scene like a smooth operator, but your suave escape takes an unexpected twist. Just as you're mentally high-fiving yourself, you hear her smirking voice chiming in, "Oh, what a coincidence! I go by Jugemu Jugemu Go-Kō-no-Surikire Kaijari-suigyo no Suigyō-matsu Unrai-matsu Fūrai-matsu Kū-Neru Tokoro ni Sumu Tokoro Yaburakōji no Burakōji Paipo Paipo Paipo no Shūringan Shūringan no Gūrindai Gūrindai no Ponpokopii no Ponpokonaa no Chōkyūmei no Chōsuke too."

And just like that, a revelation dawns – you've found your soul mate, and it turns out, you both have an uncanny talent for tongue-twisting. Who knew a whirlwind romance could be sparked by such a mouthful?
 

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You put on your best "I'm too cool to be interested" face as you casually introduce yourself. "My name is..."

And then, like the true linguistic master you are, you unleash a tongue-twister marathon with flawless precision, "Jugemu Jugemu Go-Kō-no-Surikire Kaijari-suigyo no Suigyō-matsu Unrai-matsu Fūrai-matsu Kū-Neru Tokoro ni Sumu Tokoro Yaburakōji no Burakōji Paipo Paipo Paipo no Shūringan Shūringan no Gūrindai Gūrindai no Ponpokopii no Ponpokonaa no Chōkyūmei no Chōsuke."

You exit the scene like a smooth operator, but your suave escape takes an unexpected twist. Just as you're mentally high-fiving yourself, you hear her smirking voice chiming in, "Oh, what a coincidence! I go by Jugemu Jugemu Go-Kō-no-Surikire Kaijari-suigyo no Suigyō-matsu Unrai-matsu Fūrai-matsu Kū-Neru Tokoro ni Sumu Tokoro Yaburakōji no Burakōji Paipo Paipo Paipo no Shūringan Shūringan no Gūrindai Gūrindai no Ponpokopii no Ponpokonaa no Chōkyūmei no Chōsuke too."

And just like that, a revelation dawns – you've found your soul mate, and it turns out, you both have an uncanny talent for tongue-twisting. Who knew a whirlwind romance could be sparked by such a mouthful?
I like to think that you wrote this by hand instead of copy pasting
 
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