Free bad feedback thread

[PeacefulMyst]

The greatest most fabulous cat girl, me, is here to bestow my garbage opinions on your work.

Granted I have absolutely no qualification for this, neither as an author or a reader (i read mtl chinese cultivation shit) but if you still want to put your work here, feel free to!

I'll read 10 starting chapters(more if I like it) and give my two cents based off of that. I'll also read practically anything, except I guess stuff involving unconsensual sex and mind breaks and stuff, lolicon, plotless-smut... not too big of a fan of that. I also don't like slice-of-life all that much either, and I will drop it before the 10ch mark if I don't feel like continuing.

WONT READ IF THE AVERAGE CHAPTER WORD COUNT IS MORE THAN 2000 WORDS.

Just post the link here along with where you want me to send it. Whether in the ratings themselves, here, or Dms.


(also gotta say, there's been quite a drastic increase in these since the last time I was here)

Also, I'm also quite slow. so expect it to take a bit.

Current list:

Spoiler

Five6212
Takai
Ge-O-Fey
CrimsonGenius
slays_the_crusader

Completed:

Spoiler

AdOtherwise
HelloHound
Ryuji (Paused on request)
Seaspecter
K5
Fantasyretreat

I hadn't been doing these for quite a while since I got sick then a bit busy with school work. (while yes, during the days I was sick I was so free I could've finished every request, however, this thread would have turned into Very Bad bashing your work thread. Either way, ill pick up the pace again from now.

 

[HelloHound]

would love to hear your completely unqualified thoughts about my story and how it can improve (I'm compiling a list of suggestions)

For Want of A House

Waking up is always a difficult part of anyone's day- it's even worse if you wake up inside some squalid room to spit out mysterious black cubes in a land you are not familiar with. Now imagine what Sybil's going through. Watch this short and tempered child grow, seeking a...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Anon2024]

I’ve seen enough feedback threads to know where this is going…

 

[RyujiSakamata]

can you can diss my story too? i'm a masochist

 

[PeacefulMyst]

ok ill do these later tomorrow. had a dentist appointment for something that was supposed to take 2 minutes max.

Took me 2 hours instead because of the 3 people in line before me

 

[J_Chemist]

Adding that if you read my first ten chapters, that's 120.7k words. What a shame it would be to ask.

 

[Seaspecter]

Yay someone else to traumatize with my terrible novel!

Anna’s Dream

This web novel is about Anna the only child of the enigmatic being known as The Dreamer. Join her as she travels a world filled with magic and wonders. She's not the chosen one, she has no destiny and there's no telling what she's going to do next, other than...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[AdOtherwise]

Lowly Ascent

Within a desolate realm, where discarded worlds were stitched together, a rupture tore open, releasing a small child into this fragmented expanse. Above him, the sky revealed three eerie moons, while an ominous black mass loomed ominously in their wake. Disoriented and engulfed by a putrid...

www.scribblehub.com

Feedback would be great :)

 

[K5Rakitan]

As long as you give me one star, I'd love a review

Kaiba’s Prostitute

When CEO Seto Kaiba propositions Joan, she expects a one-night stand, but he and his brother keep coming back for more. Now the Kaiba brothers want an heir from her and will pay any price to get it. How do Joan’s husband and boyfriend feel about her new profession?...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[fantasyretreat]

Would love your opinion on mine as well. You can leave your feedback in the ratings/reviews. Thanks.

Dark One [A Progression Fantasy]

Dark One is set in the kingdom of Vorthe, a land that has earned its peace and stability as a result of the efforts and sacrifices of past heroes. But alas, calamity draws near! A being of unearthly hunger for chaos and destruction, which leaves ghost cities in its wake —...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[SummerSweetTea]

Gemstone Princess: The Rise of Amalia

Gemstone Princess: The Rise of Amalia is a magical adventure that takes Amalia from the non-magical world of Elca to the magical Lita. When a dark curse crosses the boundaries between worlds and impacts Amalia's village, she learns that the curse is looking for her. The only way to stop...

www.scribblehub.com

Good/Bad, I'll take any thoughts lol you can post here if you'd prefer but I wouldn't mind a review/rating or some chapter comments if that's easier for you

Thanks : )

 

[Five6212]

Putting my work up for reading… I could go for the review/rating if you want. Also, thanks for doing this: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/764812/ravenswood/

 

[Takai]

Do you have any thoughts on mine?

Metalloid - Prologue | Scribble Hub

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Ge-O-Fey]

Hellossu!
Can you take a peek at my story? It's here : https://www.scribblehub.com/series/812971/infinity-seed/
I would like a review or rating if you want. You can also post your feedback here if it's easier for you.
Thanks for reading!

 

[PeacefulMyst]

would love to hear your completely unqualified thoughts about my story and how it can improve (I'm compiling a list of suggestions)

For Want of A House

Waking up is always a difficult part of anyone's day- it's even worse if you wake up inside some squalid room to spit out mysterious black cubes in a land you are not familiar with. Now imagine what Sybil's going through. Watch this short and tempered child grow, seeking a...

www.scribblehub.com

Done. This one was really good. My type of story. I will continue it later

 

[PeacefulMyst]

Yay someone else to traumatize with my terrible novel!

Anna’s Dream

This web novel is about Anna the only child of the enigmatic being known as The Dreamer. Join her as she travels a world filled with magic and wonders. She's not the chosen one, she has no destiny and there's no telling what she's going to do next, other than...

www.scribblehub.com

Done.

As long as you give me one star, I'd love a review

Kaiba’s Prostitute

When CEO Seto Kaiba propositions Joan, she expects a one-night stand, but he and his brother keep coming back for more. Now the Kaiba brothers want an heir from her and will pay any price to get it. How do Joan’s husband and boyfriend feel about her new profession?...

www.scribblehub.com

i already had like a year ago. Though it was a 2 star... (Now before you kill me, I have corrected my mistake.)

 

[CrimsonGenius]

Power of the Elements: Recharge

Jake Ishida expected ordinary days when he moved to a new city. He did not expect the mysterious warrior, Pilot, to give him a strange crystal. The crystal transforms him into the Fire Radiant, a warrior of order. Now, he must learn how to utilize his new powers to fight...

www.scribblehub.com

If you want to read.

 

[Slays_The_Crusader]

The greatest most fabulous cat girl, me, is here to bestow my garbage opinions on your work.

Granted I have absolutely no qualification for this, neither as an author or a reader (i read mtl chinese cultivation shit) but if you still want to put your work here, feel free to!

I'll read 10 starting chapters(more if I like it) and give my two cents based off of that. I'll also read practically anything, except I guess stuff involving unconsensual sex and mind breaks and stuff... not too big of a fan of that. This only applies if it is glorified in the story though. (or if the genre in this case is smut. am fine with smut otherwise though)

Just post the link here along with where you want me to send it. Whether in the ratings themselves, here, or Dms.


(also gotta say, there's been quite a drastic increase in these since the last time I was here)

Also, I'm a bit slow...

Current list:

Spoiler

AdOtherwise
K5
Fantasyretreat
Five6212
Takai
Ge-O-Fey
CrimsonGenius

Completed:

Spoiler

HelloHound
Ryuji (Kind of. Not really. Still a bit left. Paused on request)
Seaspecter

Would love for you to read my book, do as you please with it.

 

[Seaspecter]

Done.

i already had like a year ago. Though it was a 2 star... (Now before you kill me, I have corrected my mistake.)

Thanks!

 

[PeacefulMyst]

Lowly Ascent

Within a desolate realm, where discarded worlds were stitched together, a rupture tore open, releasing a small child into this fragmented expanse. Above him, the sky revealed three eerie moons, while an ominous black mass loomed ominously in their wake. Disoriented and engulfed by a putrid...

www.scribblehub.com

Feedback would be great :)

Done. would not continue. It was good at the start but slowly I started noticing some problems. Some descriptions were awkward to read. It got a little too edgy at times. And while I CAN see the alleyway incident as realistic, the very first conflict he got himself into was very one dimensional and stupid. I also want to mention, the MC's personality is a bit inconsistent, but I can't say too much on that without reading further. I did add a review on the website, you can read that. Gave it a 5 star though, because I don't give anything below on main site.