FREE REVIEW! Just subimit it, and I'll review it.

[FlyingPotatoes]

Please feel free to try mine. It's still at 8k-ish and will grow more. No matter the criticism since writing this is fun and will definitely improve if I receive feedbacks

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1051920/dicera/

 

[FutaKay]

Please feel free to try mine. It's still at 8k-ish and will grow more. No matter the criticism since writing this is fun and will definitely improve if I receive feedbacks

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1051920/dicera/

I like your story. I skipped right to the actual story, I did not read the world or items chapters. The characters are likeable and fun. I do wish there was a bit more description, but over all it is a solid and fun story. I would give it a 8/10. There is room for improvement.

 

[FlyingPotatoes]

I like your story. I skipped right to the actual story, I did not read the world or items chapters. The characters are likeable and fun. I do wish there was a bit more description, but over all it is a solid and fun story. I would give it a 8/10. There is room for improvement.

Thanks for the review I'm still planning to integrate more details in the story instead of using glossary and information chapters. That said I can most likely continue this way of writing for a long run. Would love to hear your review again after a number of updates if it's alright with you.

 

[FutaKay]

Thanks for the review I'm still planning to integrate more details in the story instead of using glossary and information chapters. That said I can most likely continue this way of writing for a long run. Would love to hear your review again after a number of updates if it's alright with you.

Of course. Just let me know when you want more feedback. <3

 

[EldritchPotato]

Check out any of mine :). Considering your preferences I would recommend the Orca's Serenade.

 

[Little-Moon]

Hi, I would be more than happy if you came around to review my story. It doesn't have many chapters yet (since it's fairly new), but it does have 10K words, so you are safe on that side, although I am unsure if it is to your taste.

It has a, or at least I attempt to give it one, mature context since the main character has a few psychological issues with her head and depictations of cruelty so it ticks that box. Though It also has magic, and, as you can probably guess from the name includes world hopping. (Which is kind of isekai in some way, honestly not quite sure if I can call it that though.)

World Wanderer

 

[Nevafrost]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1052102/the-truth-is-mysterious/

Will appreciate much...

 

[Notadate]

*dabs*
*leaves in original post idea*

 

[DJ_Rhaposdy]

I would appreciate your insight!

Mine's no where near finished, but it is about to wrap up the first major arc of the story, so it's as good a time as any to get feedback whenever you feel.

Former Isekai Hero was Corrupted by His Over-Poweredness, and Now the People Need Me, a Prince of this World, to Defeat Him and Save Our Land

That boy was supposed to save our world from the wrath of the Demon King. And while the King is dead, an even worse threat has arisen: the boy himself! I don't know how he came to this world, but I'm going to be the one to take him out...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[miyaskya]

Thank you for the offer! My story is complete (55K+ words), although I am slowly going through and revising it to make the writing more streamlined. Any feedback would be appreciated!

Grand Epic Elemental

In a world overseen by the goddesses of the four elements, Leiyu accompanies a trade caravan traveling westward to the Kingdom of Ishkhandar. Little does he know, he is about to meet someone who will change his life and embark on a journey to escape fate. *** This story is a...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[melchi]

Looks at the OP notices deleted membership

 

[Mortrexo]

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1055674-ascension-of-the-sylvan-cosmos/chapter/1055679/ Here, you have just the first chapter of my new novel. I hope you like it~.

 

[AspiringMaker]

Hi. Pls can you take a look at mine.

 

[tiaf]

*dabs*
*leaves in original post idea*

You deleted OP

Looks at the OP notices deleted membership

Yet people still wish to pray to the void.

 

[AdOtherwise]

You deleted OP

Yet people still wish to pray to the void.

Have to hold out hope. Maybe someone else will review in OP's place. Hope is a powerful thing after all.

 

[tiaf]

Have to hold out hope. Maybe someone else will review in OP's place. Hope is a powerful thing after all.

There is the original thread from @Notadate

 

[AdOtherwise]

There is the original thread from @Notadate

So does @Notadate have another thread open?

 

[tiaf]

So does @Notadate have another thread open?

Lmao don’t ask me. I assumed from their reply. There should be other threads in the story feedback category.

 

[AdOtherwise]

Lmao don’t ask me. I assumed from their reply. There should be other threads in the story feedback category.

Okie dokie, thx for the info