Hello wonderful people! Inspired by (and hopefully not in competition with) trinary I'm opening a feedback thread!

[secondaryinvocation]

Rules are similar.

Give me your first chapter.

I'll rate using the following format:

The Good: Things that I liked overall content-wise and in terms of execution
The Bad: Things that I hated content-wise
The Ugly: Technical foibles

Thought I'd make my introduction to the community a productive one while getting a good feel for what's current.

 

[K5Rakitan]

If you'd like to read mine, please leave me a one-star review. Link is in my signature

 

[Ge-O-Fey]

Hellossu!
I would like you to take a look at my story. There's only one chapter for now, but if you're interested I would really appreciate a feedback.

Infinity Seed | Scribble Hub

Thanks for reading

 

[TUSOG]

Please review my story too. I am a new writer
The Sacrifice | Scribble Hub

Thank you