hueyhare
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So in another recent post it was mentioned that my synopsis isn't great. I was hoping I could get some help making it better here. Here's what I have currently:
I think part of the problem is that I have a lot I'm trying to fit in there, and I start with the world instead of the character. It was also mentioned that it sounds a bit bland/cliche. What do you think makes a good synopsis? And what would make this one better?
Thanks in advance.
In a fantasy world, war rages as land runs out. Elves, Dwarves, Humans, and other races fight for control of the limited space they have. When a land mass suddenly appears out of nowhere, people flock to it, only to be caught up in its mysteries.
Kaia, one of the last living members of the Treek race, heads to the land to find others like herself and escape the war that surrounds her. With conflict at her back, and untamed wilderness ahead, she and the companions she makes discover the truths of the new land and themselves.
I think part of the problem is that I have a lot I'm trying to fit in there, and I start with the world instead of the character. It was also mentioned that it sounds a bit bland/cliche. What do you think makes a good synopsis? And what would make this one better?
Thanks in advance.