Shaizic
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Okay like I said it's a grimdark book. my grammar is bad I'm not looking for feedback about my grammar..
But I want to know is it dark enough. is it interesting? does it capture the element that you can see the world that the MC is in. and then yeah please read at lest up to chapter 4 before giving me feedback.
by the way, the book is R 18.
I'm not looking to see if you like my story if you like it great if you don't well it's not for you... I know few will like it. and even fewer will love it.
I'm not too sure if I'm even looking for reviews anymore. well I guess this is a way to advertise
But I want to know is it dark enough. is it interesting? does it capture the element that you can see the world that the MC is in. and then yeah please read at lest up to chapter 4 before giving me feedback.
by the way, the book is R 18.
I'm not looking to see if you like my story if you like it great if you don't well it's not for you... I know few will like it. and even fewer will love it.
I'm not too sure if I'm even looking for reviews anymore. well I guess this is a way to advertise